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The story is entertaining, but I'm going to stop reading, the MC's obsession with his teacher is sick, absurd and meaningless... it makes the reading experience very uncomfortable and unpleasant

why?.... this is absurdDidn't you have a stupider idea to generate a plot?

That bothers me about cultivator stories, they take time as if it were nothing: "he closed his eyes and in the blink of an eye a hundred billion years passed, it might seem like a lot but for a grower it's just opening and closing his eyes" I find it very stupid, time is time, a minute will be a minute here and in the world of my eggs, perhaps with a different name but time is the same

the mc is too stupid and unpleasant

It is not a pleasant story to read

I love how you try to make the mc seem "cool" but he just seems more and more childish, this chapter felt like two kids' conversation about toys: child °1 "hey why don't you want the transformer" child°2 "I think that there are things more important than toys" child°1 "I see, then it's like adults say, you're growing up... but you know, I think that toys are a burden that our hearts must always carry, no matter how difficult it is I will always carry toys with me, I know it will be extremely difficult but it is the path I chose to grow up, so I will play and collect as many toys as my heart desires" child°2 "haha.... so after all I am still a child who does not understand everything ... you are more mature than me my friend, I need to grow up... give me that toy and friend...... thank you, I will count on you to guide me when I lose my way" *he looks at the horizon in an extremely cool way*

then the almighty demon, super mature and "cool", collects waste and wears broken shoes....

hahaha really ?