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Do you call abandonment nonsense? REALLY?

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Apocalypse Cheater

Apocalypse Cheater

Action · ADboy245

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What love if she abandoned him when he needed her most? And what if she came back repentant? as if they had raped her and cut off her arms, those are adult problems who can do something in defense of a baby, even a fly can kill it, so what forgiveness and repentance? .... for my taste it is not a good start and I see where the story can go

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Apocalypse Cheater

Action · ADboy245

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Why do they do that ? They make the mcs look like idiots... she is about to die and in a totally unknown situation but of course "WOW MY GOD SHE IS VERY BEAUTIFUL"... really?

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This simple paragraph is all I need to leave the story.

Norman, having accepted his fate in his previous world, made a firm decision to leave behind everything associated with that life. While he didn't have much to hold on to in that world, there were women who loved him, even though his feelings for them were not reciprocated. He couldn't help but feel a tinge of sadness, leaving them behind and wishing he could take them with him.

The Omnistore System

The Omnistore System

Fantasy · J_a_zzy

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another writer who uses "mystery", very unnecessary and makes the story seem childish.... it is also poorly used, you are telling the story in the first person, but still there are "mysterious secrets" which makes no sense

As he observed the unfortunate slave, William couldn't help but feel a mix of pity and sorrow. He understood that he couldn't single-handedly save all the slaves in this world, despite his desire to help. It was the harsh reality they faced.

The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

Fantasy · Dark_Bangali

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I need context

ch 0 1 Chapter 1:- Echoes of Another World: Heroes and the Demon's Curse

The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

Fantasy · Dark_Bangali

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really ?

William stood tall, his stature reaching an impressive six feet. His fair skin glowed with an ethereal radiance, complementing the striking contrast of his dark blue hair that cascaded with a silky sheen. His piercing blue eyes held an enigmatic depth, drawing others in with their mesmerizing allure. There was no denying that William was exceptionally handsome, his features chiseled and refined, exuding an air of timeless charm.

The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

The Demon Empress's Husband is a Part-time Hero

Fantasy · Dark_Bangali

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