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I may be a bit of a pessimist... but I know this pattern... is THE update... the update of the death... let's hope I'm wrong

saiyans cannot survive in space... at all, and I mean it, is the closest thing they seem to have to kryptonite and the only one to ever do so is non-canon broly but is not a good example since a non canon baby as strong as goku in the saiyan saga is able to do it and a goku/vegeta from buu saga need to escape from kid buu destroying earth instead of protecting everyone from the destructtion and then teleport or so, and even in dc kryptonian hybrids have trouble breathing in space seems to be a small thing, but things like this tend to build up to in this case for example mc no longer being a saiyan but something else entirely

as far as I know trunks is not arrogant, rather... he may as well be the most modest character in dragon ball is the type of character that bows to a king tens of thousands of times weaker embarrased just for the sake of etiquete but is ready to kill that king along with his father without hesitation if life's are at stake, and do so as fast and efficient as possible without flexing at all, is the definition of "a man with a mission" just means trunks has nothing to do with mc arrogance, power just got to his head a bit lol

Blut vein is a Quincy excusive type of defense, Hierro is the Arrancar defense

the thing is that smallville is a bit less about superheroes and more about "Clark Kent" life and how affects him, the actual series has slow pace as well repeating the same clark saves someone in slow motion over and over, this fanfic is actually going fast compared to it and skipping a lot, but that's fine if you want to read the novalization of the series you just watch the series lol, on the other side, my personal opinion is that maybe Leo should be a bit more involved in the events somehow, I mean, making clark do this cave thing alone is a good thing, the two were probably going to clash when it comes to love and is actually a good explanation on why he wasn't there after all if he got involved later on clark would be blaming leo and not his powers for his failed love life, but I think there's more interesting things to explore like the relationship with Clark parents and anyone that knows of Leo's existance, the potential fear of clark not having "backup" one day if he gets used to it, etc and the solution to that issue was a bit predictable, leaving clark alone so he can fail in romance by himself and he can blame his powers once more instead of Leo

If you think carefully about this situation is a bit weird even originally, Naruto is actually the reincarnation of Toneri's cousing

maybe if he get's obito's chakra like how madara did for rinnegan but as it is should be impossible

so... for some reason haku and zabuza's dead mean't nothing to naruto in this world huh?

not gonna lie, never liked the use of bleach power system for fanfiction... I'm a bit of a bleach fan... and lets say is... convoluted to say the least... just the fact you are not supposed to be able to use your power in a human body is problematic enough, also the part where being a shinigami is a "power" but zanpakuto are actually just swords capable of bonding with you and can only be made by one guy, then what about ichigo? well, even ichigo's not so "forged" sword is technically just the "reborn" zanpakuto from the shinigami that became the white hollow and... just as I said bleach power system is convoluted enough to make this comment really long and kubo tends to avoid detailed answers when it comes to powers and how they actually work... if anything at times is... too abstract? bleach has a lot of "style" but is either a headache taken seriously for fanfiction or you make stuff up while handpicking what mc gets so things make some sense in a different world with different rules, I mean a zanpakuto purpose is to save souls and send them to soul society... in a world without it, and we also have the part of shinigami's being able to see ghost's, this may be important depending on the novel making the story harder to write at times if a character is supposed to die later, not to mention powerscale, I mean guessing how strong is aizen at the end of the story is hard enough... but I guess is just my really long opinion...

other pantheons were made already and some of those weapons are important to most pantheons so those probably existed already, but to be honest, a multi-pantheon world is already convoluted enough and is not even author's fault, there's simply no way arround it since dxd is already like that.

oh no... is going for the "god is actually a chad gramps but will die no matter what so mc can be free and do what he wants later on" aproach... if done well and since we don't have many characters mc can interact with yet, this will be bad... the good type of bad...

for me the part that hits hard in a bad way is that kirito is not even a name, is a nickname made ouf of the true name of mc from sao (kiri)gaya kazu(to) no one should use it as a name, besides I belive characters are the ones that make a name a "legend" I mean "Might Guy" is not precisely a good name is basicaly a pun, but if saw naruto the name Guy has a different weight for you, so at least for me naming yourself kirito is cringy in in two different levels