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King_Wyrtt
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you read the back of your palm? what does this mean? is the back of your palm the hack of your hand? why are you reading it? is this a cultural refrence?
At this point, he had already read every book on the shelve like the back of his palm, and there wasn't much to see. Yet, he stared at the shelf with a flustered expression.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
missing words sentence makes no sense
'Hopefully, by the time am done I would see it.'
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
shelve is a verb not a noun
Turning around he started to obsessively search for the books he had read, as he tried to remember every detail of the last shelve he came across.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
Deep inside his heart, he had the urge to test if reading more books would give him Exp, and just like that the idea wouldn't leave his mind almost as if he had become obsessed.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
what
He was surprised, not only because of what was written in the panel but also because of next the notification that appeared in front of him.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
punctuation
[Your efforts have been useful the system now permits you to gain more knowledge]
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
run on sentence hard to follow and how could someone see you sneeze in the helmet?
He opened his eyes a bit afraid, that someone might have seen him sneezing inside the-wisp helmet when he noticed something floating mid-air in front of him.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
do you use ai? you use so many useless words yet you miss spell so many.
After about ten seconds, he couldn't restrain himself anymore as he sneezed into the wisp helmet.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ
just under 1 mph
Rate of movement: 150 meters per hour -> 250 meters per hour
I Reincarnated As A Stick
Fantasy · TrueDawn
the whole book is a ripoff of MVS
brings new thought to sentient magic items. lol gods farming them too funny
"The Wind Walnut Branch."
I Reincarnated As A Stick
Fantasy · TrueDawn
Hearing the vague answer that came out from the system, Aurus instantly got an urge to punch the system to shreds, only to realize that the system is intangible and he can't punch it.
I Reincarnated As A Stick
Fantasy · TrueDawn
sounds like porn hub lol
Hyun, on the other hand, was more into romance than any other girl he had ever met–and perhaps worryingly so, he loved brother-sister romance stories.
Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody
Fantasy · DelzGB
again armor???
Don't you dare get hard–! If they see that, I'm done for! I'll kill myself if that's how I end up! He thought, bargaining with his virgin body.
Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody
Fantasy · DelzGB
are they not wearing armor? this makes no sense to me
He rapidly shook his head, retaking his concentration as he felt his blood run hot, continuing to climb as if he never saw anything.
Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody
Fantasy · DelzGB
"He didn't like that you raised your voice to talk to me, so you should think again before shouting," Camilla said. "Anyway, if you want to keep going with this, we will take the matter to the lord of the town. It is up to you, but if you treat our kids like that again, I will be the one to crush your balls."
I Can Make Everything Level UP
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
he said moves not movies
Eren acted blank till Nina retired into her room. Then he smirked at himself before taking a seat on the same sofa. He folded his hands, scratched his now-beardless chin and thought about many flirt moves.
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Fantasy · Grayback
I guess that didn't quite work out for you did it? your book is so so full of errors I couldn't read it.
The Vampire Cat System
Fantasy · CollinX_BrainZ