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I am currently at Chapter 543. I must say, the plot changed a lot at this point. A lot of things has been forgotten. When he goes exploring the universe, the plot became too different from how it used to be. There's no mention of his old friends, his sister, the girl that has been waiting for him in the first continent, the northern spirit, and many more. At this point of the novel it somehow became like those fantasy novels in the urban world with women popping up here and there.

I totally agree. I just finished reading the novel. There's no ending at all, chapters are jumbled, it somehow became a different story later on, no insane disciples except a little girl who loves drinking. If the author could have just stick to the story from the first 100 or so chapters then expand from that focusing more on disciples and system's origin and solving the problem with extraterrestrial devils along with better translations and ordered chapters then it might have become a great novel. However, the author decided to ditch the original story and start a new one.

Good for you. I just finished reading the novel. There's no ending at all, chapters are jumbled, it somehow became a different story later on, no insane disciples except a little girl who loves drinking. If the author could have just stick to the story from the first 100 or so chapters then expand from that focusing more on disciples and system's origin and solving the problem with extraterrestrial devils along with better translations and ordered chapters then it might have become a great novel. However, the author decided to ditch the original story and start a new one.

I just finished reading and came here to give a review. My advice to those who want to read this - DON'T. To those who are currently reading - STOP. There's no story at all. It somehow became a different story midway and the author must have lost its senses. Also, there's no ending. Very promising at first if not for the translation then became garbage later on because of the messy story and unordered chapters. What a fucking let down.

It is a good novel. Good story. However, the ending is so fucking disappointing. The story could have been longer. I hope there is a sequel for this novel.

Could have been better. There's nothing special with the ending at all and I feel like the novel should have been longer as there are still a lot of things that the novel should explain and explore.

Love the MC's cheat... However, the plot is too repetitive. MC goes here and there slapping faces, capturing beauties, facing enemies that he will let go which will then often come back to him or his family, all men in the novel are chasing after beauty aside, of course, for people close to the MC. Overall, just SO-SO...

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