Webnovel Author: Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

5mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

There will be more interesting and mysterious events waiting to unravel.

ch 0 8 Tears and warmth:A silent embrace

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

5mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

you will see

Guiding her to the safety of the roadside, Noah playfully inquired about her wandering mind and encouraged her to stay present. With a simple announcement of his departure, he left Maria's side and faded into the distance. Maria's curiosity surfaced, prompting her to ask Lilly about the incident. Sharing her perspective, Lilly admitted a sense of withheld truths from Noah, yet she assured Maria that the right time for revelations would arrive.

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

Thank you for your honest review about my story,Author

As the class drew to a close, they sauntered down the corridor, sharing trivialities and good-natured jokes. Over time, Lilly's perception of Noah had transformed; she now regarded him as a friend, especially following their recent encounter. However, persistent queries still tugged at her thoughts—his connection to her and his true identity remained shrouded in mystery. Amid their light-hearted banter, Noah's swift reflexes averted disaster as Lilly lost in her thoughts, stepped onto the road. She met his gaze, catching a glimpse of pain in his eyes, yet her attention was divided, captivated by the chiselled perfection of his jawline that defied reality.

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

you also got it perfectly ,even better than me.

As the class drew to a close, they sauntered down the corridor, sharing trivialities and good-natured jokes. Over time, Lilly's perception of Noah had transformed; she now regarded him as a friend, especially following their recent encounter. However, persistent queries still tugged at her thoughts—his connection to her and his true identity remained shrouded in mystery. Amid their light-hearted banter, Noah's swift reflexes averted disaster as Lilly lost in her thoughts, stepped onto the road. She met his gaze, catching a glimpse of pain in his eyes, yet her attention was divided, captivated by the chiselled perfection of his jawline that defied reality.

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

thankzz author

During their journey home, Maria's teasing about Noah's protectiveness continued, sparking a cascade of playful speculation. Maria's words danced in the air, conjuring scenarios of potential romantic inclinations, an ongoing jest that lingered in the backdrop of their conversation.

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

I'm delighted to hear that you used my book for reading. It's wonderful to know. Your thoughts about my book are truly valuable in helping me improve my writing skills. Could you also provide an honest review of my book 'Silver Serenade'? It would be greatly appreciated and would assist me in making improvements.

Amid their shared turmoil, Maria's instincts took over. With a tender gesture, she wrapped her arms around Lilly, pulling her into an embrace that spoke more than any words could. The warmth of that hug became a lifeline, a conduit for unspoken understanding and solidarity. In that simple act, Maria offered Lilly the solace she sought—a fleeting moment of respite amidst the chaos.

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

thankzz author.

They stepped into the room and their eyes were drawn to a photograph on the wall, a snapshot of happier times with the puffy cat. Almost immediately, a rush of emotions surged within them, and their eyes began to well up, a poignant tribute to the bond they had shared

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to itsShonali

thankyou for your support.Recently, I've been using a different account due to some issues with this one. I've uploaded a new story called 'Silver Serenade' on the other account, and I would appreciate it if you could take a look when you have some spare time. I plan to continue writing this story. I apologize for the extended wait.

ch 24 Emily

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Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Commented

ch 46 The Incident

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

It's wonderful to receive such a compliment about my book. I never imagined someone would appreciate it so much. Thank you, my friend.

ch 45 The Underground Syndicate of Ogologos High

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Commented

This chapter is truly captivating, author. Please keep writing, as I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. To be honest, it feels a bit shorter chapter, but that's just my impression, and it doesn't detract from the story's quality. The pacing might be different, but it's maintaining the story's intrigue, and I'm eager to see where it leads.

ch 46 The Incident

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Commented

This chapter is better than the first volume of the story. I'm going to continue reading it. Although I'm not sure where I left off in the first volume, I'm determined to complete this one.

ch 45 The Underground Syndicate of Ogologos High

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to itsShonali

Thank you deeply for being my source of inspiration and motivation to keep writing my story. Your encouragement holds a special place in my heart, and I'm committed to forging ahead with my writing journey.

ch 23 Shadows of the Past: Lilly's Quest for Truth

ECHOES OF FATE

Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Replied to itsShonali

I'm currently planning to update it, but my schedule is quite packed due to exams and other responsibilities. At times, I've wondered if anyone reads my book to the very end of this chapter, which has caused a slight dip in my motivation. Nevertheless, I'm determined to make improvements and more chapters . Thank you for taking the time to read it.

ch 23 Shadows of the Past: Lilly's Quest for Truth

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Teen · Rarajasmin_jazz

Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

Commented

I can see that you are establishing a strong backdrop in this chapter

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Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

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This chapter is filled with various events in different places, much like watching a movie. Your writing skill has notably improved, author.

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The beginning of this story is indeed captivating ,author.

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Rarajasmin_jazz

6mth

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I recently delved into this novel, and I must say, it's a captivating journey. While I did notice some minor grammar errors in the initial chapters, they didn't deter me from being immersed in the story. As the plot unfolded, I found myself pondering the intriguing question of why the king doesn't recognize his wife. It's a puzzling element that adds depth to the narrative, leaving me curious about what secrets might be unveiled.I appreciate the author's ability to keep me engaged and eager to uncover the mysteries within the story. Sometimes, minor imperfections can be overlooked when the narrative is compelling, and this novel certainly has that quality. I'm excited to see how the story progresses and trust that there's a reason for all these intricacies. Best of luck to the author; I look forward to reading more!"