IAmJediKnight - Profile

I love the way how the author wrote the story. I wish if the author can explore more on David's kindness towards other people (for example towards employee, friends, etc) so it will look like a side quest but it's worth noticing it. I don't know whether David will reconcile back with Sarah but I hope every girls he met can experience his kindness and crazy about him. Also I think the author should add more humor about how David response to the pretty girls who adore him so much or how David response to the situation. For example, how David is not knowing how to use expensive rare item. Also the author should explore more on David's character like humble, generous, honest, clever, very considerate about small detail. All in all, even though David is super rich now but he is still the same person.

The story is good but I think the only problem here is that the character is too over power. I wish the MC can be in dangerous situation and risk his life. For example, the hero can meet enemy that was revealed as his mentor or the enemy threaten MC using one of hero's friend (may be his uncle in the hospital). But since the author said that it will at least has 350 chapters so I can't conclude anything whether the story will shift to more logical or just keep pushing OP on the MC.