Vladimir_1524

1mth

Replied to Cum_in

sloppy writing

"Wait, Miss Luna! There's no need for aggression" - Henry said, maintaining his smile and raising both hands as a sign of peace. - "I am a pacifist and a diplomatic person. Moreover, if you attack me, you would be surrounded and forced to surrender. There's no need for a fight, is there?"

Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

War · Stoicist

Vladimir_1524

1mth

Commented

poor quality proofreading. I expected better for content behind a paywall

ch 106 “You are unlucky, young man.”

Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

War · Stoicist

Vladimir_1524

1mth

Commented

please no more flashback chapters

ch 71 Leier's Past (Final)

Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

War · Stoicist

Vladimir_1524

4mth

Commented

bro your pacing sucks. the last 3 chapter have been the exact same thing repeated again and again.

ch 151 Fight to Death!

Longevity: Starting by Trading My Lifespan with Supreme Exercise

Eastern · RebornAnew_author

Vladimir_1524

4mth

Replied to UltimateGodlyGene

review coming up:if you're looking for something well written like 'I am the villian' or 'dukes eldest son escaped to the military', novels where the mc has normal human motives and thought processes while incorporating a not overly intrusive 'system', then look else because this novel is all the typical isekai and reincarnator tropes thrown into a blender. First, the MC has no defining personality and changes arbitrarily depending on the situation, not to mention that his perception of concepts and events are at odds with his backstory (fully grown man, reincarnated and keeps his memories yet acts like an adolescent)Next, the story writing and pacing lacks any tension build up or resolution. The fights and trials are uninvolved and lack any emotional payoff at the end. Details and subplots are introduced that do not add anything meaningful to the story and more often then not showcase the dissonance between how the MC should act (considering his backstory) and how he does (cringelord).Final note: 3/10. Not worth the read but hopefully the writer learns from this project and improves his next work.

Ascension Of The Strongest Warlock

Fantasy · MKmanyr

Vladimir_1524

4mth

Posted

starts okay but during the tournament arc the MC goes brain dead. If you're looking for consistent action and attitude from a MC, go elsewhere. For a novel that makes references to how cringe most isekai stories are, the author makes all the same mistakes and packs in the tropes.

Void Evolution System

Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead

Vladimir_1524

4mth

Posted

starts okay but around chapter 50 The quality goes way downhill with way too many intertwining plots

Eternal life begins with saving my clan

Eastern · _EverSmile

Vladimir_1524

5mth

Posted

1st handful of chapters are good but then the editing becomes hot garbage. If this was a free mtl I'd chalk it up to business as usual but I'm not paying money for half ass work.

Unlocking The Easy Mode Of Cultivation After Getting Married

Eastern · Faint Fragrance Of Red Beans

Vladimir_1524

5mth

Posted

the MC isn't reincarnated as the big bad, he comes back as the cuck

I reincarnated in a cultivation world as a omnipotent villain

Fantasy · LazyBlack

Vladimir_1524

5mth

Posted

I was not prepared for how slowly this story meanders on.

Reincarnated as the Son of Conglomerate

Fantasy · mozziexxxx

Vladimir_1524

5mth

Posted

The writing isn't bad, actual brand names are used instead of chinglish alternatives but the MC is such a freaking loser with strung along character development