I know it’s important to destroy the evidence but you said it like four times without doing it in the chap
Dorio was the athlete
Dorio, for her part... Dorio had been his girl for as long as he could remember. And while he had chosen to become an athlete, Dorio had managed to get herself into the police force. Yes, the job came with plenty of unpleasantness and you could easily catch a bullet, but her grandfather had been well-regarded by several of the department's higher-ups, and they were not opposed to pulling the old patron's granddaughter into a comfortable and quiet post — provided she completed a series of training rotations so the big shots wouldn't have to blush on her behalf and constantly cover for her. Dorio could have set herself up nicely in life, but she chose to throw it all away and start helping him with jobs — for in those early days, she was the only one of the two who had any professional combat training whatsoever. Maine... Maine hadn't been able to find the strength to refuse.
Movies · Inna_OuO
A shame. I liked this fic even more than the other Naruto story you wrote. But ever since the Temari arc it felt like you didn’t enjoy writing the story as much. The interpersonal relationships felt kinda repetitive and the Humor wasn’t as good as in the beginning. When I read the first fights with Hidan or the other akatsukis I cried from laughing
Tötet es bevor es Eier legt⬆️
During that time, Aoi endured a routine that would make any grown adult give up on the first day. But he was only three years and eleven months old.
Anime & Comics · Nerdyinyang
My bad it was the middle of the Night and I was awake for 36+ hours
But no one could deny the speed—within two or three hours, Konoha's outline was already visible below. Natsuki instructed Badora to land a kilometer outside the village.
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
Probably Madara in disguise. Somehow this part gives me the creeps
Then a familiar voice called out: "Obito? You look troubled, dear. Would you like to talk to grandma about it?"
Anime & Comics · Zen_MSA
Well you have to be honest the writingstyle is really bad
Man if you complain about gramma or spelling mistakes, at least make sure your comments don’t have any.
But no one could deny the speed—within two or three hours, Konoha's outline was already visible below. Natsuki instructed Badora to land a kilometer outside the village.
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
PPPS: The Star Wars Galaxy is very big and many places use their own calendars. The GSC (Galaktik standad Calendar) is a system that uses galaxy changing events to mark new eras and resets the counter. GSC is the most wide spread calendar and it uses the Battle of Yavin as a measuring point but bevor that the Treaty of Coruscant was used (3653y Before the Battle of Yavin)
maybe the author ia a man who wants to be a woman
One Piece: Hundred-Meter Giantess, Got Garp Template
Anime & Comics · hollowborn2