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i enjoyed it very much. i can 't wait for reading the next shapter and to see how regan rex and evelyn will outsmart raphael and the king. xxx

great writing . sometimes i miss description of the röoms or dinner courts.

it's good written and i like the characters very much. but maybe a little more descriptions for creating a certain atmosphere. i like it how you explain their thoughts behind their actions. keep it up!

the characters are interesting. i like it that you don 't reveal everything at once.

very good. i read it smoothly.

your good in making descriptions of the surroundings. but sometimes you give to much information in one blow. i had to struggle true his transformation and fighting progress.

i want to know what the are hiding! so far i am still reading!

it s 11pm and i have to go to sleep. i just can t stop reading!

i am still reading, so ...

still promising

i think it s good writing. you can feel the energy from every scène.

good writing .

you have mine attention. i am curieus doe more storytelling.

you caught my attention and curiosity. but maybe a little more description from persons and places. it s difficult to feel the vibe of the story.[img=recommend][img=update]

your story fears like a train.xxx