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Finally. I was honestly waiting for something to happen with Selena because if nothing happened then she shouldn't have been written in.

lame and unneeded filler.👎

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Just great, more made up useless drama. Mikoto literally told the dude that she's fine with him sleeping with other chicks but now all of a sudden fugaku either forgot or is just a drama queen trying to make more drama. Plus he chose such a mob character to fall in love with, its honestly sad.

Be more consistent. You said in earlier chapters that Uchiha had more chakra but all of sudden they're no better than civilian shinobi.

Finally got that sweet sweet space sword.

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Lol👍

Bruh this fic makes no sense. If has no knowledge about the anime or manga then why have his previous life memories. The MC just should have been an OC who was blessed by some made up god or ghost of one piece instead of this dumpster fire.

Unneeded chapter especially with the release schedule being what it is. Plus no-one cares about the mobs waiting for the MC to return because they'll just be the same as canon just better I guess with the resources of Bruce. Pls don't do another chapter like this.

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The team he chose to finally kill orochimaru is filled with nothing but mobs. Why doesn't he at least try to get Gai to join him because I don't see how any of the others he chose can do anything but get in the way. Yugao sword getting cut in half along with her body because of kusanagi, Inuzuka becoming useless when her dogs get devoured or poisoned by snakes, anko just being in the fight will be a bother with her issues. I guess the mission will go unsuccessful once again.

Bruh at this point Ted should be written off the fic. He's honestly just taking up chunks of the story with his useless nonsense.

Tower of joy. Hoe picked the wrong dude. Plus too much work to do if he saves her, like raising her kids which will earn the enmity of the King, earning his Lords ire by not saving his sister for some used booty. Dudes got to make the right choice. It even comes with a sword.

Too short. Split the long chapters in 2 instead of 3.

👎 bruh you can't just make the villains OP when the MC has to deal with your retardedly strong gods that will be appearing while he still weak af.