Welcome to my imaginative world, where stories unfold adventures and life's values are subtly revealed. Join me on this literary journey. Enjoy the magic!
2023-09-04 Joined India
Ha..ha..sometimes vanishing is best, right? Just joking. I am taking a break from writing.
The murmur of my father's voice drifted from the dining hall as I eavesdropped from the confines of my room. "Make her beautiful, so she'll capture everyone's eye," he commanded, his tone resonating with an air of authority. Seated at the dining table, he conversed with my mother, and despite my attempts to block it out, their conversation reached my ears.
Fantasy 路 Rara_Jasmin
Thankyou so much...
ch 0 3 ENIGMATIC ARRIVAL
Fantasy 路 Rara_Jasmin
Your enthusiastic feedback has truly brightened my day! I'm elated that you enjoyed the story and its descriptive elements. As you continue delving into the narrative, be prepared for twists that will keep you on the edge of your seat and characters that will capture your heart. Get ready for an immersive journey filled with surprises and emotions. Happy reading!
ch 0 2 BOUND BY DESTINY
Fantasy 路 Rara_Jasmin
Your storytelling, Theoni, is nothing short of enchanting! Einar's narrative transported me, weaving a spell that made me feel like a part of the story itself. The poetic finale, those few lines of the poem, painted the Grove in colors so vivid, it left me utterly captivated. Your talent for crafting a tale and eliciting emotions is truly extraordinary!
ch 0 4 The First Tree
Fantasy 路 MonicaLsk
interesting...
"The battle raged." Einar's hands clenched, his eyes distant. Theo whispered to Aria, "Could this battle have left a lasting scar on the land?" Aria's gaze was fixed on Einar, her intuition sensing the deeper truth in his words. "And it tore at the very essence of Eldoria, rending the sky with cries of fury and valor. Even now, some say, a remnant of that rage lingers, awaiting a spark to awaken its fury."
Fantasy 路 MonicaLsk
you deserve it ,my friend...
ch 0 2 Verdant Hollow's Embrace
Fantasy 路 MonicaLsk
I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story! As it unfolds, the mystery will deepen, promising an even more captivating experience. I sincerely hope you continue to relish the unfolding secrets and twists. Thank you so much for your appreciation!
ch 0 1 UNKNOWN FATE
Fantasy 路 Rara_Jasmin
Theoni,it's a captivating chapter. The mystery embedded in the whispers of Grove and the enigmatic presence of the primordials compel me to delve deeper into this novel. Each page unfolds a new layer, urging me to read more and immerse myself further into the storyline.
ch 0 3 The Primordial Enigma
Fantasy 路 MonicaLsk
mystery....
Gently, Aria unfurled the ancient parchment, revealing cryptic symbols that seemed to dance in the flickering light. "These markings, Theo," she whispered, her voice carrying a blend of awe and reverence. "They're a mystery waiting to be unraveled."
Fantasy 路 MonicaLsk
research...oh...I love it...
"I've been doing some research, and I think I've found something important."
Fantasy 路 MonicaLsk
A funny chapter! The way Mimi talks is really cute, and her name adds a fun element to the chapter.
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Wow, what a name! I also regretted reading that name fully.
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Thank you for your insightful feedback on this chapter; your advice has proven quite helpful. I've already added the details about her dress in the second chapter. Your words are truly appreciated. Thank you once again. Enjoy the journey; it's bound to reach new heights
ch 0 1 UNKNOWN FATE
Fantasy 路 Rara_Jasmin
A good chapter. The story feel like a watching movie. They start with big scenes, showing a wide view, then zoom in to share every little detail. It's like putting puzzle pieces together, creating a fascinating background that keeps you hooked.
ch 0 1 Prologue: Part 1-4
Fantasy 路 Mashuk_Musafir23
These lines make me think of Tom and Casey...
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Fantasy 路 Mashuk_Musafir23
馃槃
The murmur of my father's voice drifted from the dining hall as I eavesdropped from the confines of my room. "Make her beautiful, so she'll capture everyone's eye," he commanded, his tone resonating with an air of authority. Seated at the dining table, he conversed with my mother, and despite my attempts to block it out, their conversation reached my ears.
Silver Serenade
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