Susanne_van_Amstel - Profile

Unfortunately running a side story on Joey as a girl turned me off to the point I skipped everything around that and focused on Taryn Jamie and Shaya. I think if I need to pay to read a chapter and half it is about Joey and a story that is not much in line with the main story it starts to feel like a rip off. The fact the writer keeps forgetting / mistaking he and she in characters and writing their own character names wrong is a turn off. Jamie is clearly a girl but the constant mistake of naming her a He is embarrassing from the writers part. I have skipped a bunch of chapters to fast forward through the storyline to see how it ends and that’s about as much I will do. I also don’t like the whole privilege writing stuff that the app now introduced so it’s safe to say I will stepping away from this app and the writers who decide to use privilege membership to add chapters