Badges 8
Moments 199
Too short... it ends so quickly ...
ch 80 Chapter 80
Raising a Hero
Fantasy · T.S. Lowe
Hokoma was crooked??? wrong name....
President Hokama was crooked but, not without a brain. He might have the same reservations as Mr. Uehara yet, Heisuke couldn't say to which extent.
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
Disposed not deposed....
No! That garbage had to be deposed!
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
It's always hard dealing with a disturbed state of mind .. deep breaths and good food also works well with the nature walks
ch 296 Having Breakfast In Nature
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
it should old Mr and Mrs hokama... not chisaka as that would be the mean old grandpa..
Mr. and Mrs. Chisaka were seated at the same table as Old Mr. and Old Mrs. Chisaka. The other elders, Mr. Hokama's aunts and uncles were also there.
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
The other povs could be a bit shorter, as it does slow down the story a bit. perhaps adding pov of some of the villians too? that would certainly add spice. 😉
ch 150 For Her Old Man And Her Family
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
Did you call me to tell me something... that's the grammar
"It's fine. I've finished everything. How's Dad? Do you call me to tell me anything?
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
turbulent would the right word
Arching up his eyebrows, Heisuke silently lamented how turbulence Hisaki's family life could be because of their own relatives.
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
Looks like the dad grew a backbone only yo have his head stoned, sigh that is quite discouraging. Hopefully he will bounce back and with the help of his kids, stay strong. The family should just move to seaside town where Hisaki is.
ch 136 [Bonus Chapter] Blood Was Nothing In Front Of Greed
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
nice fight, it's great to see a female character being more powerful and magnanimous than the meat head male.
ch 216 The end of the match
Fantasy Assassin in a modern world
Fantasy · lynerparel
Really? Beverages?
ch 124 Can I Say That I Get Lost In Your Beauty?
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
I wish more parents realized the impact their decisions have on their children and learn to apologize before it's too late.
ch 110 Where She Shone With Radiance
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
Does this really happen in Japan? Such a nice introduction instead of a cold mechanical voice telling one to get off the train. Author - please confirm.
[Dear passengers of N-Rail 019, welcome to Kaagawa City, a city of wonder and serenity in the heart of Niigasawa Prefecture. We hope you have a pleasant...]
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
It had become a bit slow, with a few unnecessary details, but overall it's a nice gentle story. keep going with more plots and incidents ,that should sustain the interest well
ch 102 Nevertheless, It Was A Wholly Different Matter Right Now
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
The perception of us by ourselves is the basis of most of our lives , our choices and our fears . I enjoy this philosophy part that seems to set a different tone for this story
I tried a few minutes of sleep on the bus, but it didn't work. The window I leaned on was cold and painted by frost. On the other side of it, the walkway flew past. Thousands of people hurried through their days, oblivious to my momentary presence in their lives, comfortable in their unknowing. Things would change if they knew what I am, even though I'd remain the same. So many things in life come down to perception: how we define ourselves, how we are defined by others. What is good, and what is evil... and where do we stand in relation to one and the other.
Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
Sci-fi · Guiltythree
Grammar - union be blessed, not 'is blessed'
"Aino, Shuuya, congratulations!" Hisaki greeted the newlyweds, "May your union is blessed always!"
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
The sentence is incorrect , It's either may you find a way or Hope you shall find a way
'May you shall find the way, dear child.'
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora
Did I? 😆
This is a brilliantly written story. The author understands heartbreak and grief and the fragility of hope very well. There was a wonderful progression in the character development showing how they reacted to and resolved conflicts. An enjoyable read with heart wrenching moments and imagery. Loved the jokes and sarcasm. I could not put it down Awesome Author. Needed a bit more clarity / resolution concerning the divine/devil entities
Raising a Hero
Fantasy · T.S. Lowe