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See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

This novel is too superlative. Strong, stronger, strongerer, strongererer, strongerererer, strongerererererer….. Then comes powerful, powerfuller, powerfullerer, powerfullererer, powerfullerererer… Paragraphs to describe one move, then lots more paragraphs to describe countermoves. All these renders the reader numb and any goodwill towards the storyline evaporates quickly. If u can force yourself to wade through all these, you’ll still end up not wanting to re-read the story. Ambitious storyline with poor execution.