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GREAT CHAPTER, REALLY THANKS!!!!!!!

Great chapter, I'm very excited to see how Aerys will react to endoxes

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!

interesting and different premise from your other fic, this one takes place before the rebellion. I have high expectations for this story and if I can give my opinion, be careful with the massive use of AI for dialogue have a great day!

Dude, great chapter, just be careful not to deify the protagonist too much too soon or it might get a little boring in the future (my opinion) have a great day

Great chapter, I didn't expect her to choose the mountain but it's good that she already kills rabbits with a single blow

Good chapter, I was surprised by the music and I really like the way the story goes but I must always point out that the massive use of GPT chat ends up hindering interest in reading

I liked that Fleur came back as Daenerys now what changes this will generate in the canon makes me have a lot of hype

good interaction between characters but it would be even better if there was less use of ai, I look forward to improvements in the chapters

I liked this development that Harry brought to Ned However, I must criticize Stark's lack of surprise regarding Harry's magic and the knowledge he has about the rebellion and the kingdom itself when he is someone who came from another world

I'm happy to see you following the work to the letter, it's good for authors not to get lost in their own ideas and in front of the story not being able to know how to proceed

My only big problem is the massive use of GPT chat for the dialogs, which makes them a bit overwhelming to read and mainly very artificial, other than that I wait for improvements

I wonder how old this Harry Potter is, since apparently he came from a universe where he seems to be in a real war against Voldemort

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!

bro, honestly, I really like your story, but it's that old story, I don't have the means to support you on Patreon, so all I can ask is that you continue with the great work so far and hope that my words of encouragement give you the will to continue. writing Thanks for the chapter and have a great day!!

Apart from some criticisms regarding the use of too much AI, I have high hopes for this work LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Thanks for the great chapter!!!

Great chapter!!