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I like the story, it's very much interesting to read,but the main problem is mc,his characterisation is very unstable, he is very kind-hearted but almost very dense to women when dealing with them, even though they have feelings for him which is very clear guess,he didn't realise it and said to him as some misunderstanding, also so make scenes misunderstanding happened frequently even he knows about that but he didn't like to correct said him self as it is waste of time correct them even though there related his future life deciding issue like wife's,for example around chapter number 100 there is scene in which his fiancee saw his potential and thought that she was not worthy of him , so said about cancellation engagement in front of his father and mc's father to mc and also said that she wanted to marry someone whom she spends life with him to end without separation each other, also said she didn't her husband to her to her own life after he gains power to ascend to immortality, these are the insecurities she has, but mc said i don't want marry someone who doesn't love him, but doesn't even consider her reason and even not said like i will not leave my women and wife her own , then how does he even expect someone love him as he an existence which is above everyone but in some sense when ellia about she likes him and he accept or reply just said him as she just a child then how could he about love,but in reality he doesn't even know different between attraction and love, i don't even what to call him a scum or comedian, fell pity or angry, i Didn't say don't read this or anything just saying that you have to have very High patience for choosing this novel because as chapters going story become interesting and mc accept other women's felling