Well, I understand that feeling. Honestly, I'm inexperienced in developing characters in terms of story and just roughly mimic with my understanding. If that's lacking, well I'm chased by time and also with the mind so that readers don't get bored with the slow flow and without lingering directly to the core of the story . 馃榿馃榿馃榿
ch 45 Almost wasted effort
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Hmm, I understand what you mean about the storyline so far. What I can answer is that the chapter so far is only a prologue and the story about Mc is only a foundation for me to create more creative stories in future stories that are not always based on canon. After this the story will be continued by his children who follow the flow of the original story that has been messed up due to Mc's actions.
ch 45 Almost wasted effort
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Only one thing I can tell you, it's a mess.
Yuzuha looked at my back while gently stroking her stomach, perhaps with hopes for a bright future she would live with.
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Actually the term ROB, it is only in the perspective of Mc only. The entity, like the admin, still has a superior.
"Even though he will hate me for sending him long before the main canon happened, it's better this way. If I do it in the near canon, then the Central Universal Council threatens me," muttered ROB, trying to calm the rising anxiety within him.
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Yes, he copied the way the character explored the world
Upon hearing of a popular anime centered around a quest for magic across distant lands, Petra felt compelled to embark on a similar journey. He believed that such an odyssey would afford him the opportunity to expand his knowledge of magic and unearth his true purpose in life. After all, Petra sensed that now was the time to revel in adventure and pursue his passions.
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You didn't read it wrong, it really did happen.
Yuzuha looked at my back while gently stroking her stomach, perhaps with hopes for a bright future she would live with.
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Because, Petra doesn't know yet if he is the reason why Grayfia rejected Sirzechs' love.
ch 31 The Maestro plays his Orchestra
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It's just a gimmick, so that the MC seems like a knight
"Order received," Petra replied shortly with a stiff yet chilling expression at the same time.
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She just dodged it, man
"I'm sorry, Sirzechs," Grayfia replied weakly, "it's not Petra."
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Agree, because if the story is as you imagine then this fanfic will be complete fanservice. Because as a writer, I can barely imagine how to replace Rezivim's figure when that variable is gone, hate that I say this but without him the dxd story would never exist.
ch 24 The destruction of the old Satan Faction
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No, I don't want too many women around the MC but his future life after the civil war arc ends will be a bit sad, if I describe his future.
'Moreover, Arthur also has a close relationship with that red dragon, while the rival of that dragon is Albion that I visited 600 years ago. I made him angry because Albion, as a male dragon, regarded the female dragon he was after as a rival.'
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The place he went to was Mc's territory, so as a precaution something had been installed there, such as a buff removal or weakening resistance to certain elements. You know, the main character is quite careful.
"Huuf-Huuf." A stunning young woman with an attractive body, seemingly in her early twenties with long silver hair. She was wearing a fur jacket that suited the snow conditions around her, her face slightly red from being bitten by the piercing cold.
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Remember the timeline, besides that at that time I thought it was good to make him look like a young master before returning to his original nature in canon.
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I thought it was cute, changing Ddraig's genre but I personally think the original genre of red dragons was female
'Moreover, Arthur also has a close relationship with that red dragon, while the rival of that dragon is Albion that I visited 600 years ago. I made him angry because Albion, as a male dragon, regarded the female dragon he was after as a rival.'
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His strength will gradually be shown.
In the midst of the intense battle, Toji Zenin often became the target of Rairen's deadly attacks. However, something strange happened every time Toji successfully avoided these threats. Unbeknownst to Toji, the spinning Wheel of Eight in his mind continued to turn, bringing a comforting feeling that filled his entire body.
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"Ara, you're awake, Uncle," Tenka Izumo said, smiling as she stood near the room's door. With her oversized uniform, she looked like a schoolgirl wearing military attire.
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ch 20 Chapter 21
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ch 0 1 Chapter 1 : The Beginning
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At that moment, Toji felt more motivated and began to take his training more seriously. He believed that he had the strength to become a hero for women and change the world in his unique way.
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What can I say yeah. Because from the beginning I thought about the storyline, I didn't want a mediocre story, so I decided to change the main character and make the old main shop the basis for the story that will be released later.
ch 49 Eugene Daily
Life in DxD After Becoming a Legend
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