I would recommend that you increase the length of the chapters, other then then its ok so far
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Fantasy · J14S07
for the first time, character getting dumped in another world actually felt like it was done without plot armor, its exciting so far and ill look forward to it.
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I would recommend that you increase the length of the chapters, other then then its ok so far
ch 0 9 The Promise of Return
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Fantasy · J14S07