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The people who have given 3 to 4 stars to this idiotic novel must have their brain damaged or are paid reviews. This is clearly an MTL and the author or the translator havent even edited the chapters.so many mistakes like stepmothe becomes wife in one chapter and birth mother in next chapter.Names keep on changing and dont even get me started on the grammar.Just wirting this bad review is already doing a favour for this novel.

I don't even know how it got so many power stones and golden tickets.

This book is so trash that even among the trashes it comes at the bottom.Names keep changing every now and then and new people's names keep introduced without even telling who they are.This is a new level trashiness and to think webnovel allowed this,really the standards of webnovel kepp dropping further and further.And don't even get me started on the story or character of MC.He does so many brainless things that I believe even a new born baby's decision-making and intelligence would be better than the MC.This book has made me so frustrated that I would like the author to take a printout of your book and choke on it.

This is a MTL DO NOT READ. THE NAMES OF CHARACTER, SECT, CULTIVATION TECHNIQUE KEEP CHANGING.AND THE TRANSLATOR OR THE AUTHOR HAD THE AUDACITY TO HAVE A PAID CHAPTER FROM CHAPTER 17.

The MC in this story is an original(non-isekaied MC) so he has the same problems all teenagers of his age have stupidity, hotbloodedness, indecisive.See this is why i dont like these original MC's.Isekaied MC's are better because they would atleast have mental maturity to form good decisions.This what these idiot authors dont understand we are not here to read a normal MC acting like a normal tennager, we all see that in the real world daily and we are sick of it.We are here to read about a mature MC who makes mature decisions and a MC that is not possible in the real world beacause what you are writing is not reality story but a FANTASY FICTION(@author : read a dicitonary if you dont understand the meaning of those two words).

The story development is trash, character design very flawed,and the world background is not even introduced properly even after 200 chapters.The MC has an inheritance of Immortal cultivator but doesn't know many simple things in cultivation.In one chapter he advances like a monster but in the next he is beaten down to pulp like a dog.He doesn't use his inheritance properly,and keeps getting confused with the smallest of things like for example how to control pill fire or dark energy or chaotic body.How it it possible that the people of this world know all these things and there is nothing mentioned about these things in the immortals legacy.Truly pathetic.And the author doesn't know how to prepare opponents for the MC,he prepares a Level 100 opponent for Level 10 MC,and as usual he gets beaten down like a dog,and again the cliche plot of setting a date for battle in 1 year or 6 months.SAME CLICHE PLOT ROTATES THROUGH THE WHOLE NOVEL.AFTER WRITING THIS COPY PASTE STORY THE AUTHOR OR THE TRANSLATOR HAS THE AUDACITY TO START PAID CHAPTER FROM CHAPTER 16.If there was an option of giving 0 stars i would definitely give this story.

I don't even why the webnovel even allowed this book.. Trashiest of the trashiest trash...and the book starts a paid version from chapter 12. Much better authors on this platform give atleast 30-40 chapters

English is trash..When reading the dialogues I fel like I am reading snippets of different novels..that when put together don't make any sense.

A very hot head and a very weak MC who has no control over his emotions.The first thing he does after transmigrating is not to understand the word but falls for a adult women buy thinking through his lower brain.

The story is quite good and the writing quality is also not bad.The only downside is that whenever the MC introduces a new game,anime or movie 2 to 3 chapters just go into introduction of game or anime or movie.Its like watching a written gameplay or written anime and movie,Because of that you would be compelled to skip quite a few chapters because those chapters have only dialogues of anime or movie.

The story is good...but the English is just pathetic and charater names, technique levels keep changing