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ALL I CAN SAY IS THIS NEW NOVEL STORY WAS GREAT, AND ALSO THE CONCEPTS AND PLOT TWIST. ANYWAY YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER UNOO!! KEEP IT UP I WILL SUPPORT YOUR ALL NOVEL!!

The Chronicle's of Elysium: The Fading Light of the Ancient's

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UNOO FIX THE CHAPTER BECAUSE THERE'S NO CHAPTER 10. WE HOPE THAT YOU WILL FIX IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. YOUR NOVELS IS GREAT... KEEP IT UP

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UNOO. PUBLISH THE NEXT CHAPTER AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLEASE HEHE

ch 12 The Guardian's Challenge

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IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO UNDERSTAND THIS CHAPTER HAHAHAHA

ch 12 The Guardian's Challenge

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ch 13 Journey to the Enchanted Forest

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i have no comments for this chapter

ch 12 The Ancient Prophecy

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OH MY GHOD THEIR FRIENDSHIP IS SO COOL I LOVE IT. I HOPE I HAVE LIKE THIS FRIENDSHIP[img=update][img=update]

ch 0 6 The Power of Friendship

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UNOO? WHERE'S THE CHAPTER 10? WHERE DID IT GO? UNOO FIX IT IMMEDIATELY

ch 10 A Test of Strength

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THIS IS HIGHLY RECOMMEND CHAPTER!!

ch 0 9 The Trials Begin

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ch 0 8 Allies and Adversaries

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Okay so my comment on this chapter is. REALLY GREAT I CAN REALLY UNDERSTAND THEM AND THEIR JOURNEY[img=recommend][img=recommend]

ch 0 7 Into the Unknown

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i like it

ch 0 6 Crossing the Threshold

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So what does it means in here??

Master Lysandor's presence had illuminated their path, and as Celestial Guardians, they were now entrusted with the realm's ultimate destiny. The Celestial Ascendance awaited, and with the sage's guidance, they were ready to face it with unwavering purpose.

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ch 0 4 Unveiling Hidden Powers

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great i want you to catch up the readers on this chapter, so i hope you on your next novel you can catch up more readers to your Novel's[img=recommend][img=recommend]

ch 0 3 A Magical Encounter

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hm, first of all i like the character's and and also the other side characters and their Point of View. Awesome keep it up. One day you will be a great Professional Writer Unoo!!