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The Redman Family seems to be based mostly on the Habsburgs. Therefore the technique of taking over families by spreading its members everywhere was actually done before and proven pretty effective. The Habsburgs controlled mich of Europe at one time.

If it weren't for the existence of extraordinary powers, Hudson would have to wonder if he had returned to the Middle Ages. Apart from the addition of different races, the Continent of Aslante is almost a replica of medieval Europe.

King

Fantasy · New Sea Moon

Blade1243

3mth

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Good story, dont like how the chapters at around 145 are going though. The author made it seem as if someone with great abilities loses out to an enemy with far worse abilities. Made the reading experience in those chapters a bit grey.

Born in apocalypse

Fantasy · COSMIC04

Blade1243

4mth

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This story is pretty good all things considered. There are spelling errors found only 0-3 times a chapter and minor inconsistencies with abilities. My only major issue is the 2 fast passes needed to gain one chapter, essentially requiring the reader to invest more into it. It is likely better to search for 2 cheaper reads with similar quality to this story, but I will say that this story isn't a bad read. I only wish more people could enjoy reading it with fast passes, but every chapter needs 2 passes to unlock.I will also mention that I am about 150 chapters in and know next to nothing about the world and geography besides it being coastal/humid area(🦂). Only Three cities were ever mentioned in the story at this point as well. If the author doesn't get better with world building, the quality may decrease with time.

The Soul System in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Alan_Wafula

Blade1243

4mth

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Impossible. The CD of Duplication is 3 days and was used at most 2 days, 6 hours from this point. Unless Henry fought the clone for 16 hours straight, he used Duplication long before the CD had 'past a few hours ago'. This may be add for the ability that was repeatedly mentioned to have a '3 day cooldown'.

[It has been 2 days and 5 hours since you lost your consciousness.]

The Soul System in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Alan_Wafula