Webnovel Author: FugiTee - Novel Collection

Something I often wonder about is Lucifer's age. He is a dragon, yet you see him getting flustered at the smallest things and he doesn't possess any characteristics that most dragons do. This is an unpopular opinion, but I don't like Lucifer as a character. Had he been of a different race, sure, but he is a dragon who is supposed to pride himself on the mere fact that he exists, yet he is nothing more than a flustered high schooler? But hey

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

The time-lapse was abrupt and sudden, I apologize for that, I will do my best in later chapters to keep the story going at a steady pace that doesn't leave out too many things and gives the reader at least an image of what is going on

The change of scenery was once again a misstep on my part, I felt the need to rush the story without considering how it would seem to the viewers side

It is not necessarily her age but the amount of time she spent in the forest but I will fix that thank you

The POV situation was also quite messed up and I realized this later on, once again, things got clearer as the chapters went on. the pace was slowed and the descriptions are coming in more frequently

I realized this in later chapters and changed things and slowed down the pace. I appreciate the suggestions though

Our female lead's illustration just to give you guys an idea of her appearance

here is some an ai generated image of Adam, hope you like it. also the reason his hair is brown here will be revealed in the next chapter

Author here. So i am currently going through my book to check how it is from the eyes of readers and so far it seems fine. But, i wanna here anout the book from you guys so if you can, please leave a comment telling me what to do