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In terms of plot, this is pretty interesting but the writing needs a lottt of improvement. Like, during dialogue there would be missing details or responses wouldn’t match what was said before. For example, sometimes someone would answer a question that wasn’t asked or bring up something random without even finishing the previous convo
ch 0 3 The Royal Academy Of Silvara - Bandits!
Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer
Groomer 🤢
So Mary wanted to offer herself to me to fulfill her part, huh? Although I have a beautiful fiancée now, I never get laid and am still a pathetic virgin in both worlds! Sophia is still too young for that kind of thing. She must have been ripening for at least a year for me to harvest her bountiful fruit.
Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
Can affirmative even be used in this context 😭
"Affirmative, mom!"
Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
wow…
Birth Control - allows the user to control their fertility. The user can also choose the gender and race(from one of their parents) for their offspring. Also get rid of the genetic disorders caused by inbreeding.
Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
craziest comment goes too… FTBanime69. No cuz fr wtaf is this 🤨
Birth Control - allows the user to control their fertility. The user can also choose the gender and race(from one of their parents) for their offspring. Also get rid of the genetic disorders caused by inbreeding.
Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
It might be a choice but it disrupts the engagement of the reader and makes it harder to read
ch 0 3 The Royal Academy Of Silvara - Bandits!
Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer