If you do decide to do harem, I would recommend sticking to 3-4. Too many and their personalities start blending together and it's just a chore to keep up with all of them, not to mention you having to give each of them enough screen time lol
ch 16 Chapter 16
Book&Literature · Quick_Ben
Thanks for the chapter
ch 14 Chapter 14
Book&Literature · Quick_Ben
I don't personally dislike the Yun brat, I actually enjoyed his character until that God Realm arc. The only 2 characters that I hate with a passion are Little Aunt and that burning heaven dude, that's more the authors fault tho lol. I would honestly like it if you avoided the cliche of dragging Yun Che in this, it would be a breath of fresh air, either way, I'm along for the ride.
ch 12 Chapter 12
Book&Literature · Quick_Ben
We gonna meet Queen Jasmine soon?
ch 11 Chapter 11
Book&Literature · Quick_Ben
True, just so much is left unexplored in the ogs since it's mostly just a linear path of the MCs rise to power. You could place another MC in that same universe and have him take a completely different route than the og MC while interacting with the og characters and places, and even exploring other parts of the universe and meeting new people or people from other novels in that universe... Just so much untapped potential imo. It would probably be a bit much for an inexperienced writer tho, too much information involved.
This book has been deleted.
Yep, definitely enjoying this. Thanks for the chapter.
This book has been deleted.
Just a bit of rambling from me, so you can ignore this. Why is there so many ATG fics on here and not fics of IET, Er Gen, or Silkworm Potato's work? Heck, even MW and TMW fics would be appreciated... I mean, they all have novels set in the same universe and they have so much untapped potential in them for fanfic writers. I'm just curious why most of those works are ignored for novels that aren't even finished and honestly are on a lower tier compared to most of those( that part is just my opinion). Either way, I really enjoyed your Raizel fic, so odds are I will enjoy this one, good luck on the story, and sorry for this irrelevant post lol.
This book has been deleted.
Maybe Shōko from A Silent Voice?
[A/N— probably gonna finish this match in next chapter the we will dive in to slice of life chapters for some days— btw suggest me characters that will be perfect for being Izumi's (Miyamur's) cousin—like daughter of his mom's sister also add the anime,manga or light novel they are from!!]
Anime & Comics · freshleaf
Using shadow clones is ntr, they have their own will...If you are just talking about an avatar that you personally control with something like another thought process then you MAY have a point, but pure shadow clones is definitely ntr.
(The reason why I made his Doppelganger form unable to feel lust is because I don't want his different from to play with women and I will make sure that only his incubus form will have seggs with the female. But if you are interested in tentacle play and such then comment me.)
Anime & Comics · Clockwork_055
If you put this in the fanfic section it will get more readers, CD fanfics are rare on here.
ch 47 Chapter 47: The Seizure of Faith
Coiling Dragon: Ascending from an Accidental Find of a Divine Entity
Fantasy · Daoistl3nl2f