Point in case here, you say Guardians have a diverse diet. WTF??
According to Teacher Liu, Guardians had a very diverse diet. Since the Little Guardian had been born so suddenly without any preparation, he could only offer the limited food he had available and let it choose.
Eastern · Kissing Orangutan
Its “Lord” or “Lord Baron” even without counting his noble status as a duke’s son. A Baron is the lowest level of NOBLITY. Meaning they are still a noble! Below them are knights, who ARE supposed to be called “Sir”. essentially this dude calling him “Sir Baron” is a insult and offense, on the level of someone calling your mother a 50cent whore, and your father “Unknown” among fifty! With his father being a Duke, the offense is even higher. Because he is insulting his father’s family which, as a Duke, is the highest form of nobility, and comes second only to royalty.
"As you wish, sir." he said out of habit and corrected himself, "Sir Baron."
Fantasy · Potaatoo
Melody giggled, not chuckled. She is female and doesn’t have a Adam’s Apple.
"Often enough that you end up seeing that look more times than you bargained for." Melody chuckled.
Fantasy · ChakraLord
And how often does he feel excited. Drop always. Unless you rewrite it like, “And how often? Does he always feel excited?” This is only way that wording makes sense. You would have to make it two separate questions.
"And how often does he always feel excited?"
Fantasy · ChakraLord
He is male not female! He can’t giggle’ after puberty! Men chuckle, women giggle. The difference? Pitch and tone. The Adam’s apple doesn’t allow for men to giggle unless they are forcibly TRYING to. High pitch equals giggle. Low equals chuckle. Children and women giggle.
He almost let out a giggle of excitement at what he was reading. Just this skill alone, coupled with his stats was enough to make him even more dangerous than he already was at soloing dungeons.
Fantasy · ChakraLord
Again RAISE….. Not Resurrect
[Skills: Pickpocket, Lockpick, Cursed Blade, Hex Shield, Blood Armor, Resurrect, Death Bolt]
Fantasy · ChakraLord
She is a Necromancer! Not a damned priestess, Saintess, or some holy thing. A necromancer can’t resurrect shit! They “Raise” the DEAD, as undead! Raise not resurrect dude.
[Skills: Resurrect, Death Bolt]
Fantasy · ChakraLord
Author fixed it
"I should at least name the bunny right? Hmm, how about... Mirko"
Fantasy · Bechi_Kingston
True, but a mc who uses his head? Explores his abilities, his relationships, and makes steady progress through challenges, without being a moron, or suicidal? That’s admirable, entertaining, and worth cheering for. This guy? Hah!
"Mirko. Normal harassment. Keep the flankers off-balance. Don't commit to anything."
Fantasy · Bechi_Kingston
lol if it was me I’d go with something simple and a bit funny, like names from a tongue twister or nursery rhyme. Something like Bob, Rob, and Betty, or, John, Jack, and Jane. Simple, but amusing. You could even have Jack and Jane run up a hill to fetch a pail of water. Heh
Guardian Sprout waddled toward the nearest glowing reed, tapping its stem cautiously with the edge of its shield.
Wasteland: I Awakened A Plant System
Sci-fi · Sharky_Monster