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Nen_pin
female LV 3Big time anime fan I also like reading fanfics
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I can't find the parts 馃槶
It didn't bother me at first, but then I noticed father was pushing Hinata as hard as he was pushing me before. Hinata was weaker than me and had a hard time keeping up with the training. I finally snapped when I saw Hinata cough out blood, and father didn't seem to care as he continued to attack her. Later on, I went to talk to him. Just as I was about to enter the room father was in, I changed my whole aura, making it more intense.
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I need her to hate Danzo. I need her to want him dead...
ch 28 Chapter 28: Anbu
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I don't understand the last part.
ch 28 Chapter 28: Anbu
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what's repeated?
It didn't bother me at first, but then I noticed father was pushing Hinata as hard as he was pushing me before. Hinata was weaker than me and had a hard time keeping up with the training. I finally snapped when I saw Hinata cough out blood, and father didn't seem to care as he continued to attack her. Later on, I went to talk to him. Just as I was about to enter the room father was in, I changed my whole aura, making it more intense.
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I already said I thought it didn't make any sens. I'll probably edit it. Please try and endure my terrible writing
ch 28 Chapter 28: Falling sick
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Thanks I will.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Neji Hyuga
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Ok thanks! Tell me what you think of the next 5 chapters.
Not really sure why I decided to do it like that 馃槄
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Reborn
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the 1st problem while soon be explained. For the second is just an excuse she uses. And for the third she's a prodigy she reads books and ask's people like Kakashi- sensei for help.
ch 21 Chapter 21: Hinoka Hyuga Vs Kankuro
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Yeah that might be a better option.
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It has to be in Naruto.
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Who do you guys want me to put instead?
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Thanks for your review I'll try to improve.
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ch 29 Chapter 29: Leaving the village
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