Harem? That's all you had to say. SKIP!
This novel has made me hate the word "survive" so much. The author has some sort of strange addiction to just writing suspense scenes for no reason. This is the beginning of the novel! I gave this novel a pass for the first four chapters as I thought the author was just trying to hook the readers in. But now I'm wondering if that's all this novel is. One long train of incidents meant to make you feel suspense. The thing is that suspense works best when you care for the character. The author has done nothing so far for me to even like these characters. I'm just confused and annoyed.
ch 0 8 *Screech*
Fantasy · GRE3D
I am so confused? The kid's dad is stronger than MC yet for some strange reason he want to leave with MC for training? I pray this isn't a military that employs child soldiers. Why not just have the dad rejoin the military?
ch 27 Pissing Contest
Sci-fi · Galanar
Why is this relationship so forced? Why can't that little kid wait like everyone else and join the Military? Join his village recon team and gain valuable experience for a few years then join the military after. And MC is enabling him like he isn't supposed to be a low-profile special forces soldier who has to leave in week.
ch 26 Meeting His Parents
Sci-fi · Galanar
Noooo, we skipped the training arc?!
ch 14 Issuing A Challenge
Sci-fi · Galanar
I thought MC was an 80 year old man? Not to mention he ran a large business. Why is he talking like a teenager? He has the emotional regulation of a middle schooler. I like the novel, that's why I'm still reading and criticizing so much. Just tired of authors creating characters with profound backgrounds, just to have them act like children.
ch 0 8 No Escape
Sci-fi · Galanar
Oh no, I hope this isn't an MC made dumb for plot points. He's in a military bunker yet doesn't take the time to read up on everything that happened, or to use surveillance tools on the base to see if the outside is safe. He just wakes up and opens the big door that has kept him safe this whole time.
ch 0 2 Out Of Time
Sci-fi · Galanar
This is the type of amateur cringe nationalism we expect from Chinese/Korean novels. Oh, look at us Canadians, we are so nice and well behaved, unlike this annoying American character I created. It's perfectly fine to have an annoying character be American, but it becomes cringe when you make them they state it as a part of their rant.
ch 26 First Tournament Announced!
Games · Galanar
Enjoyed the novel until this point. I just had to stop reading here.
ch 491 The Perfect Dao Law
Eastern · Goose Five
You're completely right. Just that author was so busy trying to create an "homage" to MTJR that he forgot to improve it. Since MTJR had Rudeus grow up alone, author did the same for the MC. Even though MC should have grown up in a village and constantly been around people.
ch 10 The Guild
Fantasy · DelzGB
Why do authors copy that perverted trash so much? (Jobless reincarnation)
ch 0 6 Practitioner of Magic
Fantasy · DelzGB
Another incompetent/sleazy dad trope. Sigh. We as men have to do better, did all you authors grow up with bad dads?
ch 0 3 The Name Is Emilio Dragonheart!
Fantasy · DelzGB
Oh no, not a conscious adult in a kids body. I always hated this. Now we have to live through a perverted adult starting at his mom, then live through the stage where he flirts with little girls as well. SMH. Why not have him gain memories after becoming a teenager or something?!
ch 0 2 A New Life
Fantasy · DelzGB
How many times is he gonna be the chosen one?
ch 28 Solomon
Fantasy · MellowGuy
I have a sneaking suspicion that "knife" is an incorrect translation. They probably mean Saber, and Knife Power is just Saber Intent/Force. (A long knife is basically a Saber/Machete) Also, who knew MC would be this ruthless? I get killing the father and son, but even the wife? This is how I know I couldn't survive in a cultivation novel.
ch 13 Chapter 13 Where's the promised stupidity?_1
Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan
Eastern · MoBei is MoBei