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I will say this here don't even ask for a Harem , everyone has his own tast but this is not mine , rather I hate it so don't bother .

damn .... that's... deep AF , even my 12 yo self wouldn't chosen such a name lmao

it's... okay I'd say , the big problem with this story it's how the author writes , it gives the characters no depth and just the way his whole family died i could see it miles away . overall it's something to read if there's nothing left to read .

wait he really named himself chaos overlord ?

to be honest I didn't think that would be so disappointed in the taste of fanfic readers but here we are. my problem is , it's badly written like really, to give you an example : Yami finished the ninja off then went to the other one killed him killed the next one ... it's bland , there's no taste to it , and the MC is supposed to be a calculating MC etc ?? well he isnt't.

usually I wouldn't write a comment on any kind of fanfic , but this deserves one . The pace is really good it's smoothand flows without hurting my brain ,the backroung is great we have an overview about a lot of things that are interesting , our MC is likeable and doesn't act like a moron and if he does its because he's still a kid (and for me it's understandable ) we also have a picture of hiruzen which describes him perfectly as he's neither a bad guy nor an overly loving gramps , he's just incompetent like really . I know a lot of people won't like this FF because it's either "not fast enough" or there's no " harem" or no "romantic interest" let me tell you this is not a fiction written by some kid , don't try to corrupt the Story with your infantile mind.

ps -I'm astonished by the number of good ratings it seems overly suspicious or at least weird

honestly it's... particular , if at least you're searching for a story where there's a quick development and not much sense to how people interact with each other .If I mention the typical Chinese cultivation novel where they just do things over the top for example the eradication of sarutobi and shimura clans which really makes no sense , it's for you .a flat 2/5 because it aint the worst I've read , read it if you're in search of something easy to understand if (like me ) you've read good novels beforehand just don't read you'll find yourself to be disappointed .no hate just criticism without any malicious intent.