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ch 0 1 A Pushy System
Fantasy · VERSON
(Only a few chapters in)Writing: You can understand what is written, but there are a few grammar mistakes from time to time.Story: As of now, information about the world, power system and the likes are being relayed to us, however there is that particular mystery vibe which I like.Character, World, Updates: Nothing to critize there :)I may sound very negative at the start of the review, but I enjoy your story very much so keep it up!
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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
ch 0 1 A Pushy System
The Angelic System That Turned My Life Into Hell
Fantasy · VERSON