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It sucks to have an Uzumaki dying in labor.

So far no description of the MC's face.

The story is really interesting but what kills me is his love interest Hermione is a definite no for me the story itself is very original but it seems that the author is one of Hermione's persecutors or better said Emma Watson, who despite being beautiful is Feminist trash.

I agree that Tsunade is one of the best female characters in the Naruto work and yes she is very little used, I know that after becoming Shinobi they are adults and yet in the work there is no couple with a significant age difference, yes it would be very good if the MC wasn't almost completely apathetic and the last few episodes see a slight improvement in that but it probably has more to do with the other characters than with MC, not even the original Tobirama was that apathetic the MC almost seems like Danzo's wet dream, apathetic, emotionless and robotic who would fall in love with a character like that, Tsunade seems to have a very specific lover profile and even the people closest to her follow the same idealistic and emotional profile but of course this is fanfic it doesn't need to follow the personality pattern of the work original, one of the biggest problems is that the MC is very disconnected from Konoha and he has no real goal other than to survive and I don't doubt that the main events will follow the canon, perhaps a romance with Tsunade of the connection that the MC lacks .

Interesting story, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

This story is by another author, the tags don't even make sense, this story is clearly not a system story.

Maybe, it's probably between her and Tsunade.

I don't know but I find it difficult to see Tsunade taking the MC to the series, the difference in age and experiences is a very important factor. I know she only had Dan as her boyfriend and fiancé but it's still very strange.

I'm glad you're back, I'm looking forward to the next chapters

This Sigma Series

Honestly I'm getting tired of this story again the MC is useless and there's no explanation as to why he has no memories and his powers are at their lowest level again everyone thinks he's dead, I'm seriously thinking about dropping this story, I got here mainly because it's one of the things I look for most in young justice.

It seems that in addition to being robotic, the MC is asexual, not that there are any relevant characters for romantic interest for this eunuch MC.

What a dry story, one dump of information after another, apart from the time it takes to give a description of the fifth elder it's ridiculous I think it was almost a third of the chapter if not more, I made an effort to read this chapter, if I continue reading This story seems like I'm going to have to skip many parts because of the unnecessary information dump, these two chapters really discouraged me, they defeated almost all expectations of it being an interesting story.

I was looking forward to the chapter and I wasn't disappointed, I'm even more looking forward to the MC's meeting with Elijah, things are going to be interesting to say the least.

Be careful not to overdo it, one of the many mistakes is the MC has a lot of bloodline limit release and in the end he barely uses one or two, which would be a very strange thing if the ninjas didn't try to dissect the MC for having a lot of limit of lineage, ends up becoming a cycle in which none of the scenarios is satisfactory.

The story is really fun and kept my attention for a long time.

It was a good start, I'm wondering if he will have access to magic proficiently, if he won't just be another Targaryen with a different surname but it was a really good start, the passionate intentions between brothers were really very good.

Finally the story is moving forward, despite the MC being as charismatic as a door, with him being almost a robot the story in general is good only the MC has no personality or emotion.

The story is interesting but one chapter a week is very slow I almost always have to reread part of the previous chapter for you to understand what is happening in terms of the previous chapters I barely remember anything it's really a shame since it's a good story, despite the ridiculousness of the penultimate chapter everyone being kidnapped without anyone knowing or seeing anything.