Webnovel Author: Kiss_melani - Novel Collection

thanks for the honest review 😌.I re-read it and edit it.Writing a book is super hard 😂,I will practice till I'm perfect .

Your first story ? ,Yet you write well .Leo not being able to express himself to Sarah is sad but who knows ,all for the best.There is a saying that what kills a man is a woman .Leo sacrificing himself for Sarah is mind-blowing and crazy !Though,if he didn't do that,he'd probably live the rest of his life in regrets ,after all, he went to the party because of her.I was confused on what a Teror is but Elanor explanation clarify it .I was like wow ,that girl is good 👍.This story is nice.Also, I thought Leo would struggle with his daily task like 200 push up or so.But he did them ,just like that ? .I screamed reading the daily task , Well not everyone is lazy like me 😂.Kudos author .let's go kick more terror a$$.

Giving up five stars! Tony and his dad is sooo wicked! Why are they executing innocent people like chickens ?I also think it's a bad idea for Janet mum to confront the Alpha king ,who does that ?She should have maybe confronted Tony in school or elsewhere but in the palace ? NO.I cannot imagine the hatred ,and anger boiling in Janet 🥺.And for Leroy ,I think he is nice ,still watching him though .I must say I'm hooked ,Added it to my library already 💛.I hope their escape plan is successful .Kudos Author .

Thank you for your honest review I will work on it and improve .

First, the cover is 💛💛💛.I love it.captivating synopsis .interesting story I'm definitely adding this to my library.

Love the introductory part , I felt the emotion of the mc like I was the one going through it.The identify of the Mc wasn't revealed at first ,I was really curious , 😂 lol.Nice story definitely adding it to my library .

Love the introduction it's easy to flow with .I was hooked from chapter one till ....Adding it to my library immediately wouldn't want to miss this good book .more ink to your pen author .

Thank you you should add it to your library to be updated when I post

Here we are with another exciting story .Well-written description and dialogues .Im curious to know what will happen in the next chapter .

Good title and cover .I love kpop stories 💛💛💛.I was a little bit confused with the change of pov but I adjusted and flow with the story .I love the dialogues and description easy to read and understand, more ink to your pen author.

Another interesting story 💯.The title hell in heaven brought my attention a click on it and I'm all hooked.More ink to your pen author ,no one is perfect so keep going.

interesting story 💯.I flow with the story easily it is well-written with easy dialogues .my new Addiction 😌

Apocalyptic and videogames? 💙💙💙.These are kinda rare and well-written. I love your breakdown of paragraphs, it's easy to follow and understand. The use of onomatopoeia is lit ✅.You describe those sounds well. Expecting more updates author.

Thank you for the honest review, I will work on those.