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maybe favorite chapter in the entire story

Where's the update at this story is a masterpiece, set up a patreon yo

getting to the thick of it! should generate a bunch of chapters cause I need to see how this plays out asap!!!!

first chapter was fine. look what happens when you let a bunch of cowards herd you, you lose your interest in writing YOUR OWN story. this story is top tier amazing, hope to see the newest dragon teammate and its a latios, love you

great chapter, fight was excellent

I find this story and become addicted to it but new chapters stop :(

eh, decent ending but half the chapters was moves being listed. I'm not sure why authors have a fetish for this but If I can let you in on a little secret, I didn't read a single one. that means half this chapter was just skipped and that leads me to skipping more along the way as I'm less invested. still interested but definitely disappointed after the first chapter

cool concept. there are enough stories starting off on step 1 so always interesting to see something different. hoping it's not just legendary bombs all around and it sticks to these two but liking what I'm reading!

I was tough on you so let me say this, these last 10 chapters have been perfect. writing is well done, battles were good and story progressed. there wasn't useless filler and by goly man, great job

I agree with the above comment. The last two chapters should have been one chapter, but you have a patreon, so you are incentivized for more chapters over the quality of each chapter

words bumps, part that keeps getting skipped**

The level listing of moves has to be one of the biggest one could bumps lol. I would recommend simplifying that as it's a block of text that keeps getting stick. Do you honestly think making half of the chapter just level 40 skill does this, 45 does this? If you feel the need to do it just put it all in one paragraph, like future sight level 50, takes 5 mins and is fast, don't need to have 4 paragraphs saying each level what it does.

Good! it's about time we see mr.mc They get in a fight. He has a hype team, but we haven't really gotten to see it in action yet beyond Mavis and her zone, so we are definitely waiting for that next chapter. I'm curious if you are taking the zone if you take other things from the show or if just sticking with that cause it kinda fits with aura/adrenalin

Best chapter, yet, good fight. You have started Mc off strong which is awesome. Be cool to see him catch one of the eon twins

Just re-read this during the hiatus as it's one of my favorite all-time fanfictions. Would love to see yuga host his own auction and see some more blue pokemon sold off. Think revival grass island has been one of my favorite segments, so any more ideas like that are awesome. I am patiently waiting for the update and can't wait to see where you take the story next