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i just have 1 simple question.. ik this isn't r18 novel or anything.. and im fine with that.. as long as its funny and filled with some action and romance.. i dont even mind full righteous protagonist... but does he even get laid? im past 137 chaps and was on maids scene.. is it all same clickbaiting and getting blue balled cuz mc's mindset or will he actually let loose at some point?

im sorry.. as far as i've read.. it feels less of a romance and more of a wingman story.. i know its a setup.. but i just wanna know how long mc has to suffer.. or how long he has to use different identity to have some actual romance.. i hate it when it happens under different identity.. its frustrating when mc gets treated nicely with fake identity while real one getting looked down and insulted always... is there even anyone who shows any romantic interest abt mc without having to put mask on? and if so.. how many chaps far?

yeah story is all over the place.. at one point i thought its gonna take academy route.. it was good till then.. there was nice setup.. regretting mother and sister, cocky villain and hero with both of them having their system meanwhile mc with hes system and unique story take.. an underground boss lady sofia.. but then author threw all these setup out of the window.. even sofia and made mc go underground with different identity.. seriously 0 love intrest.. unnecessary mother - son drama.. randomly throwing hes birth is testube? setting mother- adoptive son romance i guess? although writing is nice and all.. plot is unstable af.. harem and romance tag is fake.. except mc.. everyone getting some action with their lives.. i aint masochist to read 500+ chap of mc suffering, hiding and running away..

dogged a bullet there.. i was actually looking forward to academy arc.. i knew it was cliche and all but i was still in for ride cuz writing and nice face slapping.. rn im on 48 and bruhh he kinda forget abt teacher and sofia already.. academy arc has thrown outta window and now hes on different mission without even getting rid of existing foes.. also it feels like villains and protogonists (not our mc) getting more action with their love life than mc.. i mean i respect that mc is on path of chad and all.. still feels bad that he doesn't even have single romantic interest.. ik there are lotta setups for him but if all those setups are gonna play out after 500+ chaps.. i'll just stop rn and come back.. it feels like writer recived some feedback and he completely abandoned orignal plot and setting up new plot now.. it started well with mc's madness attitude which i really enjoyed.. but story is all over the place..imma come back after some good stable developement

some thoughts.. i read some reviews abt mc being wuss... nope.. he might be weak physically but plays right cards at the right time.. hes cunning and uses game knowledge perfectly.. he does have system and all but its not so much used.. system doesn't guide him to do xyz things.. its upto him how hes gonna do things.. theres femdom sure.. but its wholesome af.. he doesn't lust after every woman he finds roaming around (this sold me tbh.. best quality).. knows how to take responsibilities when its needed.. i love the fact that mc is actually a good normal guy but has enough brain to be when to become ruthless and when to bow head and show love to peeps he care abt.. basically no garbage, lying, raping personality there are few things that i do really want to see author throw more often.. like demons and thier plans.. like even small interactions of mayb with different pov would be fine.. like whats happening in demons side.. whats happening in gods side who gave them devine mark.. lot of those small yet important things are felt like mentioned and forgotten..

Im really digging this.. idk why it has 3.3 rating.. only problem i find in this whole novel is constant use of some words/sentences like "I couldn't help myself but reveal a bitter smile" its toned down a lot now.. but mentioning expressions can be improved.. story +10, mc +10, pacing is fine.. ero content isn't too much and pretty balanced.. altho i do expect more scenes.. atleast some small interactions.. scenes are well written as well..