Badges 4
Moments 26
dude I have no idea who these people are anymore. none.
"Greetings, are you perhaps the person Eman mentioned?" Zennie was surprised at how gracious and beautiful the person in front of her was. Looking at her appearance, she probably was of the same age as her, or if not, might be a year younger. Her well-defined face and long silky black hair are very attractive.
My Magical System
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
ahhh i see. now I understand the problem. you think what u want matters to us. well it doesn't not get back at your desk and start writing. we don't got time for ur dreams and needs. now get to work j/k........ well not really
I may take a one-day break after this, and my college semester has started as well, so I will try to upload as much as I can.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
dude doesn't let logic dictate his story. I mean he's said this competition was in a week and then let like a moth go by. nothing makes sense
'Lightning Ball!' He shouted inwardly, while also harnessing his energy in a bid to boost the skill power.
Manaless Mage
Fantasy · Gladstone_
this isn't the first bad Grammer of this chapter. I'm too lazy to flag everyone of them.
'And, there is no way I can lose this bastard.'
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
so we being told this again. yay
ch 270 Chapter 63.2 - Divergence
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
when the author isn't boring us with overly technical fighting stuff he can write really well.
ch 267 Chapter 62.3 - Initiation
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
ugh I hate this kind of suspense author is doing. the whole u all think this is a fight when really I entered code into computer secretly mua ha ha type of suspense sucks. by the way I know it's not going to be a code into a computer or anything like that that was just an example
ch 1172 An Outer God’s Definition of Victory [Part 2]
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy · Elyon
i wish u would make up your mind about his personality. he can't be a super cool assassin that even if we say his whole life was him just being abused but was somehow still innocence eyes of youth there's no way a guy could be a top assassin and be that inept. I mean how could he infiltrate a party? I mean one girl flirting with him at the party would turn him into a creeper. I will objectively say it would kind of make sense that mom would want daughter to hook up with strongest male that could lead their guild I think it makes sense on paper but your execution of it makes it come off cringy and a very gutteral part of me is like nope but I know logically it makes sense just the way u word it. I'm not trying to be mean I'm giving u my honest opinion because I like story just parts of it are bad
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The Strongest Assassin Reincarnates in Another World
Fantasy · JALLEN
what is the point of this? it wasn't funny.
He is a hopeful youth and can think of anything he wants that makes him happy. Does he need to explain everything that he thinks?
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
this chapter almost made me want to drop novel it was so stupid
ch 52 Evan's Girlfriend
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
author the more he uses shadow walk can u explain to me why the govt wouldn't feed him shadow cores to use his ability? or why didn't he get f ranks stones he couldn't eat and exchange for shadow himself?
'That was dangerous if I hadn't used shadow walk skill on time I might have died there' a chill ran down Evan's spine just thinking about the earlier attack that he faced.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
dmn I'm reading this on day after xmas
that's the standard
---) Shadow Storage: A special shadow space where you can store anything that is not alive. The size of the shadow storage depends on your core rank.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
why do u jump from perceptives like that? u were at first describing stuff as mc looks at it and then u are like a figure jumps out. that's usually used at beginning of a chapter. there's no point in doing it that way
The salamander sensed the danger and immediately turned towards Gideon before unleashing a torrent of flame from it's mouth towards him.
RISE OF THE POISON MASTER
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
maybe u should call this something else?
u could of included something like "despite being an ability user with weak ability he was still stronger than normal humans
(Authors note: The reason Gideon didn't die instantly was because even though he ha a weak magic affinity, his body was still at least 4 times tougher than an average human.)
RISE OF THE POISON MASTER
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
dude why are u arguing with people like that? even the best masterpiece is criticized harshly. if it doesn't apply let it fly . why spoil ur own book for someone who probably won't stuck around?
Time isn't there because earth isn't the only planet that can use astral energy, and they happen to not have access to time. Yeah I spoilt for you guys.
RISE OF THE POISON MASTER
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
she
Gu Yanfei didn't say a word. He followed Ruosu through various doors and arrived at the inner room of the main courtyard.
The Full-Leveled Healer Transmigrates to a Real and Fake Rich Daughter Story
General · Sky Cold
will try thank you
(Ed note: Stan Lee was an American patriot and volunteered to serve in the Army Signal Corps during WWII. That said, he was always willing to stand up for the “little guy” and wouldn’t have bought into the propaganda painting Aron as a villain. If nothing else, the hospitals and schools opened by the Coeus Foundation and the lengths to which he went to ensure that disabilities were accommodated by the GAIA OS would’ve convinced him that Aron was a good guy. Stan Lee was far from stupid, after all, nor was he blind.)
Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
Sci-fi · Agent_047