Badges 7
Moments 36
in such a matter didn't she just fight astron? or do u mean life and death battle? but didn't her and Ethan fight in the dungeon together against people who worship demons?
Even though this was her first time facing a human opponent in such a matter, she needed to do her best.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy 路 Darkness_Enjoyer
author u spending way too long describing a fight that is in the past. if u wanted to spend this long u shouldn't of told us it was already over and then did a flash back. I am literally falling asleep trying to slough through this fight idc about. I'm not even being dramatic I really did
ch 356 Carnage In The Capital [Pt 9]
An Extra鈥檚 POV
Fantasy 路 Magecrafter
yeah I didn't like this at all
However, different from someone, she needed to act like her character. In times like these, she wanted to swear to the author for making her such a rigid character.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy 路 Darkness_Enjoyer
i suggest waiting until a chapter is named happily to start reading again where I'm not waiting on a cliff hanger in a bad spot
ch 1184 聽It鈥檚 My Win! [Part 4]
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy 路 Elyon
harems do great when u don't shine a light on every girls feelings and the like. I don't want my harem novels to depress me. for instance there's this other harem novels where the mc is walking with two of his wives and he starts thinking about how his third wife can't hold a hand. like we all know that's a real perdictament like we just gloss over it. don't focus on it. u never are going to make a harem novels romantic and when u try it's just going to come off depressing
ch 1176 A Darkness That Belonged Only To Her
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy 路 Elyon
who is this? asking for a friend
Magnar was happy that he had gained someone with rank A battle power as his ally, and couldn't hide it as he talked to me and the rank A hunter with the huge beast that had stepped in to end the fight
Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Games 路 Adui
what's point of writing it like that? did she spell it out? its confusing
"Although not all massages end with a happy ending, you are deserving of one," Aurora said as she placed her hands on Lux's chest, using it as support. "Don't worry, Lux. A week will pass quickly in this place. All you need to do is enjoy your stay. If we're lucky, Dia might even get a new sister soon. So, do your best okay, D.A.R.L.I.N.G~"
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy 路 Elyon
question? how do u view ur main character? if i kind of new more about his internal feelings about whats happening to him it would be easier to connect because as a reader i could see u taking his friendship with dude as someone he can use to get his revenge and secretly hate for a multitude of reasons. like helping him when he didnt need help when he let him suffer when he needed help i could see him hating him for it. also he could hate him for having a loving family and not taking advantage of it when mc would of killed to have a family that loves him. but i could also see him connecting with dude as his first friend and thats what makes the reader conflicted. like i dont know if i should hate these people or love them. now if u said i want to fool the readers into not knowing i could understand that writing style but to pull off that type of story u cant lie to reader to trick them either. like take the movie sixth sense. all the clues were there all along for watcher to figure out on their own just very few did. as of right now though as a reader u have made his friend a sympathetic character. i can see value in either way u go. just my two cents. keep up good work
The air crackled with urgency as Miss Nakamura's voice cut through the tension. "Ichiro, Akihiko, watch out!" she urgently warned, her voice carrying a sense of impending danger.
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
elon musk is known for how he names stuff and a tendie isnt even remotely funny like why u posting laughing while in tears emoji when no one is laughing with u? 馃檮 this is more accurate
ch 416 Economic Shockwaves
Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
Sci-fi 路 Agent_047
let me know when u fix earlier chapters where I can start over. loving the new chapters.
ch 114 CHAPTER 113 - FIRST ATTACK (1)
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
this is much better. before this it was almost like he was tricking himself as well in his internal monologue
Ichiro nodded, feigning relief at her response. Meanwhile, beneath the facade of innocence and concern, his mind whirred with thoughts of the impending task and the necessity of keeping his true intentions hidden. The delicate dance of secrets and hidden motives continued, each member of the team concealing their true desires behind a veil of cooperation.
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
btw I am also ur top fan as well. I use my brothers account as well lol actually 6 of ur top 25 fans are me
ch 113 CHAPTER 112 - Ichiro's Revelation (4)
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
lol I need to spend 27 more coins to give u a golden ticket so I thought I would just buy 3 colas just to see that I have to spend 27 more coins on unlocking chapters rofl oh well tomorrow u get you first golden ticket
ch 113 CHAPTER 112 - Ichiro's Revelation (4)
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 113 CHAPTER 112 - Ichiro's Revelation (4)
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 113 CHAPTER 112 - Ichiro's Revelation (4)
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 113 CHAPTER 112 - Ichiro's Revelation (4)
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
it's cool. iIappreciate u listening to me. sometimes people put a tone to my text messages that they don't have and think I'm being mean. I've been giving u power stones today from various accounts. I love the story and I get ur a new writer. I wouldn't complain if I didn't love ur story. it just needs some adjustments. I don't quite understand why hes mad at his grandparents. aren't they victims as well? didn't they treat him good? maybe include a flash back or something where it shows us why he's saying that.
However, for Tomoko, she knew Ichiro had terrible plans for Ayami. Facing the possibility of her impending death and uncertain about her husband's fate, she grasped onto one thought: only one person could help them now. She needed to find a way to contact Ryoma.
SYSTEM REBIRTH: Rise of the Forsaken Heir
Fantasy 路 AngelGrace
there's not that many supremes that lux can only build his army out of them meaning saints is main force of his army. so they perfect as meat bodies
Since Blackfire was an understanding and compassionate coffin, it nodded its head and even told Ampelos to enjoy his last day with the Saints, who would soon become its new lackeys.
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy 路 Elyon
Im glad u wrote this it would of been better if Sylvie was there too tho and her Irina got jealous at same time and react to eachother
ch 322 Chapter 76.3 - No title
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy 路 Darkness_Enjoyer