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I’ve been having a hard time understanding what you’re saying and this is a good example.

For some reason, neither of the smaller and most likely younger foxes accompanied us to the other clearing where three humans had already breathed their last while two more still struggled, refusing to die in this god-forsaken place.

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Why wouldn’t he call her grandma? After all, Yuichi and Tsunade probably know her as grandma

"This...alright I promised after all, just don't tell Mito alright?" retorted Hashirama with a complicated expression.

Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Yasashiki

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God I’ve seen this so much much that it’s honestly getting on my nerves

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The Transmigrated Author

The Transmigrated Author

Fantasy · zowji

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They wouldn’t think that it was Henry’s idea since they had lost all trust in him

The First Battalion kept advancing like a massive tortoise through the battlefield, with Henry at the forefront, resembling the head of this great creature. They passed by the craters, where remnants and pieces of barbarians could be seen, some slightly buried in the snow outside or laying inside the craters. Their bodies were destroyed. The soldiers couldn't help but cast awestruck glances at Henry's back, which seemed as formidable as that of a mighty dragon.

Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

War · Stoicist

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Wouldn’t they have flat teeth to crush the crystals rather than sharp teeth which would be far more difficult?

'So it's sharp teeth are that way because of how it has to grate through the hard rock and pierce it. I bet they're absurdly strong too!'

An Extra’s POV

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

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Aw man I was really hoping for something like a marksman rifle or assault rifle

The design they worked on looked extremely similar to a modified desert eagle. This was going to be his initial design for the Magic Gun.

Conquering The Game's World

Conquering The Game's World

Fantasy · Dakshay

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Rear*

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Monarch of Slaughter

Monarch of Slaughter

War · Luciferjl

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Screeching, not chirping?

The moon hung high in the sky, casting a shimmering silver light across the vast expanse of mountains. The rugged peaks were adorned with wild trees and the rocky terrain glittered under the moon's radiance. The only sounds to be heard were the whistling of the night breeze and the screeching of crickets, their chorus filling the otherwise silent air.

Monarch of Slaughter

Monarch of Slaughter

War · Luciferjl

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Why would they be enraged?

This could mean that the boss monster was not truly enraged and just putting up a facade so they would let down their guard. Jayce's frown deepened, the uneasy feeling still niggling at his heart.

Chef in the Apocalypse

Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

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See, just that comment alone was enough. There was literally no need to say it before

Zane's gaze sharpened as he honed in on the larger monsters among the Beast Tide, each one a grotesque embodiment of terror. "I can see the Praying Mantis we fought off last time." he responded in a small voice.

Chef in the Apocalypse

Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

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I don’t like these types of comments, they feel unnecessary and boring

The Praying Mantis stood tall and silent with its one remaining scythe held up against its green exoskeleton. Were Jayce present, he would instantly recognize it as the same monster that had decapitated the three teenagers in Qinling city.

Chef in the Apocalypse

Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

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This needs to be revised

ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Zell Delacroix | Blessed By Fate!

Dragon Lord: Erotic MMO

Dragon Lord: Erotic MMO

Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus

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And this would take awhile. Depending on the size of the entrance, he could be there for a few days before it was complete

First, he found several large leaves and sewed them together with some vine, making a large but light bush which he could cover the entrance of the cave with.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith

Fantasy · WriterTheos

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LOL!

"You're supposed to attempt this after your one month training," muttered Melzer, rubbing his forehead in worry. "But your crazy-ass tried jumping on the first day. Are you suicidal or something?"

Return Of The Strongest Player

Return Of The Strongest Player

Fantasy · AceAmbrosia

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So the former elite player with connections to a powerful group is given incredibly sensitive information despite the fact that the mc knows practically nothing about this person. This is a very stupid decision

"I regressed," responded Arthur stoically. Melzer spat out his drink, staining the floor in saliva and dirty water. However, neither of the two paid any mind to such minor inconveniences. An awkward silence descended upon the room.

Return Of The Strongest Player

Return Of The Strongest Player

Fantasy · AceAmbrosia

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