It's getting places, I like the direction you took with it, I hope you keep going this direction, the story could be a masterpiece, the paste of the story too, so here's my thoughts. You should introduce the antagonist soon, or let's say Kyoko get's a attacked by some thugs or something....not such great ideas but consider it.
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Fantasy · SADAU
Thank you for reading mate! the new chapter just published, no way someone saw this so early, this is bizarre to me.
ch 0 1 Chapter one: Another world.
Fantasy · SADAU
Dude! Thank you so much for the power stone, you have no idea how much this means to me
ch 0 1 Chapter one: Another world.
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Fantasy · SADAU