Mrfekry

6mth

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The story so far is Quite good, the first chapter did well introducing the characters and their personalities as well as the objective of the characters The second chapter introduced how they will achieve that objective well, and some difficulties while building up suspense for the third chapter While maintaining the mystery vibes , The Third and Fourth Chapter was where the main events happened and did well maintaining the characters and the environment they where in and lastly chapter five is well ending the story and making it ready for a new chapter . Overall A well written story and character development while maintaining mystery[img=recommend]