Man, this could've been so much better.The story started great. Lots of good ideas that made an amazing novel. The author set up up some interesting characters (friendly or not) that were going to payoff later. I didn't even mind that the MC made mistakes, since that was a chance for him to grow up as a character.But the quality dropped REALLY fast. By chapter 100 you could see several weird phrasings or two sentences/paragraphs that meant the same thing but worded differently. Also the bad guys just felt like they were carbon copies of each other, no creativity. The power creep was also intense. We went from Rank D being something impressive, to a Rank SS just being throw into our faces like they were common.All in all, I'm sad and disappointed.
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Man, this could've been so much better.The story started great. Lots of good ideas that made an amazing novel. The author set up up some interesting characters (friendly or not) that were going to payoff later. I didn't even mind that the MC made mistakes, since that was a chance for him to grow up as a character.But the quality dropped REALLY fast. By chapter 100 you could see several weird phrasings or two sentences/paragraphs that meant the same thing but worded differently. Also the bad guys just felt like they were carbon copies of each other, no creativity. The power creep was also intense. We went from Rank D being something impressive, to a Rank SS just being throw into our faces like they were common.All in all, I'm sad and disappointed.
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Fantasy · different_minds