CrackingJokes

It's evident you don't have much interest in this story. It was good back when I replied last, but now.... The story is just emotionless and bland. The story writing is like an AI. I recommend that you don't waste your time by posting this. I believe you could have done better than you did in the beginning. The use of AI and the lack of proper ideas made the story bland.

Yo! The Author here! I know I am shamelessly giving myself 5 stars lol and gave myself a powerstone... Didn't know I could do that (The powerstonem I mean). I hope you guys enjoy reading the new chap! P.S. I have exams next week, so the next upload will be on upcoming Sunday mostly. Thank you!

It's going quite well... No need to stop writing. I am sure you will achieve what you want soon enough. Though there are a few problems I can see in your story, (The story seems to be written with AI) The plot progression is going good.

Breh! You basically stuck most of the chaps behind a pay wall... and you don't even update, making it hard to read. The beginning was very good, but IDK what you tried to write in the last 20 chaps... Just get on with the plot progression! And make like 3 chaps or so exclusive, not a major portion of it! At least will keep up engaged for a few more days until you could start writing properly

The MC, I feel like, is not working hard... It's almost as if everything is handed to him on a silver platter. The story also seems too... positive, too positive in fact, which makes it kinda cringe.

Going quite good, but it's quite slow-paced. Plus, won't it be troubling for the MC to use his money openly, cause it's all illegal. Would recommend showing a way he makes it into clean cash, cause he can't expand much further from what he is doing right now without doing it.

Hey, if you want me to correct grammatical errors, please do ask me, I read through your story and I found a few mistakes. I can help you write better so the story can be even better. (Just a fellow light novel fan helping out another)