well let me say this first, your writing is really amazing i specially liked the events you portrayed during the nine tails event night it was thrilling it was sad it was perfect everything was great.. But even to get to that part i had to endure a lot like a lot lot now let me tell you the issues i found about the MC and why it didn't made sense. First of all, i get it that he isn't the usual reincarnated mc, he got fragments of his previous life when he was born and after a few years he got clearity that much was clear, i ignored the part where he didn't remember izumi granted he might have lost those parts of memory or js forgotten since its been a while he has seen the series or simply he didnt remember those things are ok. But when he got clearity about his memory that those memories are actually real and those events are going to happen then ( it was sure those memories were real deal after the third shinobi war) the mc since he is a kid as portrayed by the author, should have panicked or worked hard to change the future or during the kyubi night just alarm your parents a few hours early just made up excuses since you are a kid i am pretty sure no normal kid would stay calm knowing a nuke carrier is gonna come just outside their house. But i got the general idea you needed the father dead otherwise the mc would have stayed super weak( he is still weak since he doesn't practice and all, all he does is reading books about history in library). The story doesn't make sense either you make the mc a reincarnator who doesn't care about his current family or just make him unable to remember anything or make him see glimpses of uncertainty into the future.. but no you made him a kid you gave him all memories and made him act so weirdly which is completely unrealistic any kid would freak out or try hard to change the outcome but all your mc does is cry and say weird stuff while doing nothing
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well let me say this first, your writing is really amazing i specially liked the events you portrayed during the nine tails event night it was thrilling it was sad it was perfect everything was great.. But even to get to that part i had to endure a lot like a lot lot now let me tell you the issues i found about the MC and why it didn't made sense. First of all, i get it that he isn't the usual reincarnated mc, he got fragments of his previous life when he was born and after a few years he got clearity that much was clear, i ignored the part where he didn't remember izumi granted he might have lost those parts of memory or js forgotten since its been a while he has seen the series or simply he didnt remember those things are ok. But when he got clearity about his memory that those memories are actually real and those events are going to happen then ( it was sure those memories were real deal after the third shinobi war) the mc since he is a kid as portrayed by the author, should have panicked or worked hard to change the future or during the kyubi night just alarm your parents a few hours early just made up excuses since you are a kid i am pretty sure no normal kid would stay calm knowing a nuke carrier is gonna come just outside their house. But i got the general idea you needed the father dead otherwise the mc would have stayed super weak( he is still weak since he doesn't practice and all, all he does is reading books about history in library). The story doesn't make sense either you make the mc a reincarnator who doesn't care about his current family or just make him unable to remember anything or make him see glimpses of uncertainty into the future.. but no you made him a kid you gave him all memories and made him act so weirdly which is completely unrealistic any kid would freak out or try hard to change the outcome but all your mc does is cry and say weird stuff while doing nothing
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