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The story overall is interesting and makes me want to read more but the roundabouts are way too much. The suspense gets on my last nerve. One moment you think something is going to happen or there would be some good news then the next thing you something unnecessary interrupts. I get that it is to build the story but it gets pretty annoying sometimes especially since the story is not yet completed. I will admit it's interesting and want to read more even wish for a movie to be made out of it but please the suspense makes my heart run wild . And to be honest I don't know if it's a good thing or a bad thing.

The suspense and roundabouts are getting on my last nerve