I know that this is unedited; I read it at first as the princess is named David. Then I realized it was princess, David.
"It's you who was slow. You knew I would come looking for the princess David. If you're that surprised then maybe you should have planned better or not carried it out at all."
Fantasy · AMerci
I chuckle at the misspelling of grammar.
He had a sudden name change.
ch 31 Tendency to you
Fantasy · Stephanie_king1
I have really wanted to lecture the whole lot of them for many chapters now. Aubrey is a hypocrite. She is gullible for believing that people don't have hidden agendas. Dimitri is a fool; he might as well have died rather than live like that going forward. Rhyland should have confiscated her phone instead of having love blinding him.
ch 166 Chapter 166: The Cure
Fantasy · ButtonsWrites
Kara not Adira
He lifted Adira quickly and placed her on his lap, making her face him.
Fantasy · Zita_Winner
A lot of unfinished sentences in the beginning chapters of this book.
ch 19 Finding the Meeting
Fantasy · AMerci
Marianne/Elizabeth's reaction with the prince doesn't fit with her usual behavior. I understand that she was nervous about Karina, but I would've thought she would hear him out a little. She could have easily gone to find someone like Jasmine to sus out what happened instead.
ch 444 Chapter 444 — Fight, Love… Die.
You Think I Won't Talk?
Fantasy · XimenoideX