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Primordial_Devour
male LV 3If your paths intertwined with mine be prepared to meet your end as I am the embodiment of death and known through all realms as the primordial devourer - kind of catchy don鈥檛 you think?
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I鈥檓 too busy with school and work so when I have a lot of free time, I鈥檒l probably come back.
ch 0 1 Enchanted Clothes
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You鈥檒l understand later.
ch 0 1 Hypocrites
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I am down to negotiate. Just tell me what part of the chapter you were unsatisfied with.
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I added that in there just to make drama.
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bro read a little further, I explained why. And if you think about the reasoning does make a little sense.
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Lol
<Hey! Get away from me! getaway now! Aughhh!> The screams of the announcer echoed in everyone's head, no longer making them hesitate.聽
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Don鈥檛 worry, the concept would be the same but I will try to improve on the grammar.
Guys, I know there are several mistakes that I made during my time as a new author. So, I plan on recreating this novel because any change I make, might or might not affect the story but don't worry I plan to do so when I finish the first volume.
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no harem but romance.
Forshadowing?? 馃か
Their eyes were like the ones of a dead fish, lifeless and dark, completely given up on life.
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No, it would be shown in the next chap.
ch 25 Return I
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Ok but Bro how do I improve my grammer馃槶馃槶
Lol I don鈥檛 mind at all, and thanks for your opinion.
ch 0 7 Heavenly Oth
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I can add it but later in the story
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