It me,Facez. I love to review many,many novels, fanfics and support many Authors that create a lot of story that we enjoyed and probably bad mouth on a story that irk with some stupid logic,instead u can just go tell me 'It plot armor' that work ya know!? and if that story is good and I myself like it I will draw fanart for u!! it good!?
2023-11-13 Joined Global
give it more details in fighting scenes bro, u wrote it like aftermath of battle instead of some action
ch 0 6 Chapter 5: In the Forest
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
more!
ch 0 3 Chapter 2: Quest
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
Thx for the chapter
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: Link Start
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7
he starts to babysit Ethan and basically goes with the flows of the story. he knows there is more of a demons contacter in school yet he is not doing anything to bring them out at all. he just waits for the opportunity to come instead of making one and when someone gonna try to attack him directly or indirectly he just standing there doing nothing to 'gather more information ' like in the mine arc. he just leave the seeds of problems alone. and recently u focus on romantic relationships with many girls but with the way u make mc posanality composed, introvert want to be alone,don't care about how people's think of him. it just ruin story bro
ch 354 Chapter 82.3 - What the heart sees
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
i think i'll start hating MC. he going to part of Beta mc
ch 354 Chapter 82.3 - What the heart sees
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
It's just a gamer system boi. u system don't have anything unique
The system is really powerful, just seeing my knowledge increase like in a game, as well as time limited learning bonuses, made me want to study and learn...' I thought surprised. I thought, surprised.
Fantasy · NunuXD
don't introduce a super natural please .
ch 0 2 02 - Change
Fantasy · NunuXD
he said ' Chaka available for everyone to use ' no?
'Must be because his Chakra has been unlocked. It can't be helped. With him awakening his Sharingan and unlocking his chakra, there is only one path that he could follow.' Miwa thought.
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
eh and why there are civilians in naruto tho and daimyos can just raise their own shinobis not go hire some hidden villages as create it basically inverted it in one go on other hand hire hidden villages there is no 100% royalty just one of their missions
'Must be because his Chakra has been unlocked. It can't be helped. With him awakening his Sharingan and unlocking his chakra, there is only one path that he could follow.' Miwa thought.
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
again with root excuse to hide Mc power. just go to the academy, perform good enough to cast a three hokage eyes, find a good sensei and form connection .
This thought did not bore well with him. Not because of the lack of resources for self-improvement but due to no backing as he knew the moment he would show a speck of talent the root forces would come calling.
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
ohhh cool
*[Odin's Eye- You may have been born with eyes that gave you superior vision and a plethora of abilities. But with 'Odin's Eye' you will be able to glimpse into the secrets of your world and its people. New paths will open for you once you can truly 'see'.] Cost: 2PP
Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE
what damnation mean?
"I thank the Paths every day for the Second Hokage's choice. Lord Hiruzen has turned into such valiant kage." An older civilian woman said with a slight devotion. It was more than likely that she was here for a grandchild, it seemed very unlikely she could've bared a child that could be going to the academy….' Did I get sucked into a housewife drama session...Damnation' I finished the thought with a hefty sigh, at least it burned through a few minutes.
Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE
so cute
"Explain, Sakumo I am way too annoyed for your usual banter" She said with a sigh as her anger vanished. She seemed to finally take notice of me as I was still held by Sakumo like a bad kitten.
Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE
Daiki in my head. super cool eh
Interestingly, Daiki's attire had changed. It showed just how serious he was taking this. Before, he tended to wear slacks and simple t-shirts, but now, he was adorned in full on shinobi gear, his ankles bandaged to keep the standard blue shinobi pants he was wearing from catching on anything, while atop his torso, he wore a shiny ebony black chest plate trimmed with dark blue, the weird turtle pauldron that he knew absorbed chakra from training with him, clear in view.
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
i think u introduce teams play too soon. in the beginning I just want to know more about MC, how he be this strong,what he have that make him MC of this story,what set him apart form the rest players. and romantic relationships too, I thought u would build some soil posanality of the characters before progress to a romantic arc or something
ch 10 Chapter 9: Departure
Sword Art Online: A Journey Undiscovered
Anime & Comics · Rinchan7