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obviously he will win, how can this be not be one-sided fight, only because author wants to extend the number of waste chapters and make readers mentally unstable and totally waste their fast pass and coins for his novel.

why do need his back story man can't you finish the scenario you r simply dragging the story.

obviously he is Adrian chase you r simply making it more obvious about him having black hair and blue eyes.

now for next chapters you r going to show Rey pov before going on next topic it's frustrating and simply waste of coins and fast pass.

he could have arrived when the sword shattered was he waiting for a formal invitation to intervene in a losing fight.

can't he just quit the part time job and focus on system.

how many more chapters is he going to avoid his surroundings and troubles like a coward and keep running away can't he just accept his life he is leading for once.

I think Adonis is lot a shady character it's impossible to be such aa good character.

it's already third chapter where he addressed his strength growth at the end of the chapter but still not acting on it.

can't you finish it in one chapter it's little bit too in depth story writing which makes it boring.

can't you make him advance to next floors to increase his battle power , it fells the story is not making any further progress and is stuck. If you keep on going to add unnecessary details for every chapter it's going to get boring to read.

he can do all his experiments after he becomes little bit stronger u know it's frustrating that he wasting his time with hobs for almost 10 chapters.

chapter and it's name didn't match at all there is no slaughter only his inner monologue which is a waste and boring.

I don't think it is hilarious at all what is he even doing with his intelligence why should he be afraid of her, can't he tell that he is strolling around and it is none of her business.

shouldn't he discard his previous name and refered as such and use his new identity name in reference while writing