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3 days ago
Commented

Please do! And thanks for the chapters!

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4 days ago
Posted

Although... The story itself... Isn't bad... It gets... Really... Reaaally... Reaaallyyyy... Annoying... This way of... Writing. After all... Wouldn't be better? To say what you want to say... In a single solid sentence... Than split it apart... In several pieces? Same when people talk... They dont say the whole thing in one go... Thet just... Talk... Like... This... Seriously, this story is interesting and would like to keep reading it, but that kind of writing is just to annoying. I've read several fanfics with this same problem that i ended up dropping just because of this writing style. I dont know if it's an original or a tl, but if the original is like this too then wow i dont know how people can like this style.

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9 days ago
Commented

I thought it would've been either Sabrina or Diantha next, Diantha cause the foreshadowing from the dance plus her denying that there would be something between the two of them (you know typical face slapping when they actually do). But this is interesting, wonder who will be next and what Miori's ideal is.

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17 days ago
Commented

There's a fairy type immunity to dragon but the steel type lucario can get poisoned without the ability corrosion?

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18 days ago
Commented

2nd time a chapter was cut and skiped lol, hope it doesnt keep going like this or what would be the point in reading :v

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28 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapters! [img=recommend][img=update]

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1 months ago
Replied to KoKo_890

Even better then! Looking foward to future chapters [img=recommend]