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What I meant is that I don't understand why everyone seems like they would actively want Raiden evil ! The problem isn't his writing, the problem is that I'm just not getting the story because everyone seems to hate him! The X-Men hate Raiden because his mother neglected him! Thor hates Raiden because HE neglected him! Raiden's powers got out of control and the first thing these people thought was: let's literally condemn him to hell instead of helping him control his powers! (They say this with a huge smile on their face and an expression of happiness and relief . At least that's how I understood these scenes after reading these paragraphs well ) . This all seems ridiculously forced and exaggerated to the extreme ? And the worst part is that this kind of nonsense actually happened many times in the comics, in fact, the entire Avengers vs. X-Men conflict, Civil War, Civil War 2 still happens . Not to mention what they put Spider-Man through for nothing in the comics, it just doesn't make sense! But people ignore it because they try to focus more on the narrative of the story or on the Aesop that the story tries to portray as "Doing the right thing and being a hero, even though it's difficult" or later the Writers realize what a mess they did and then they do a retcon , but I don't really understand why in this story it seems like everyone thinks he's a villain since he was born and punishes him like a villain since he was born!

Until now I don't understand why everyone in this story appears so excited about the absolute rot that is Raider's life . This is a big F*** you to how Writers generally describe the personalities of Marvel characters as being Ideal Heroes despite all the Horror they commit?

Innocent people died in that car collision that exploded and neither Indra nor Natasha cared? In fact, Indra did this on purpose! Or was it something else?

It's not a mistake! The writers do this intentionally, although it is too ridiculous even for a superhero world or a superhero comic book story, generating a lot of irritation. I myself feel upset with the current arrogance and lack of respect that writers have towards their fans, it's as if they were saying to us "Come on, change the channel or go read another comic. We challenge you!" . But this story is great!

I thought about that too, in fact it was the first thing that came into my head before I finished reading, but I'm not talking about this story itself, I'm talking about the DC canon, about how the writers don't even try to make the story have a minimum of sense, completely depending on idiot balls

This is a very stupid mistake and completely in keeping with the DC characters (In fact, in keeping with the characters in all of the Superheroes Vs. Supervillains universes). Who would have a "private" meeting in the same place as a person with superhearing? Apparently Batman, the "Preparation Master" of the DC Universe! Both in this story and in the Canonical Comics. These Idiot Balls/Idiot Plots frustrate me.

It's Darcy Lewis , not Daisy

I forgot to write this: their way of speaking seems overly formal.

This chapter is full of errors, you keep writing all the dialogue in the first person as if Clark were speaking, but it's the other characters . You're also going overboard with using the characters' personal names in every sentence of the same conversation.

Before he didn't seem so dense, just resigned to the fact that this aura made no one like him in a romantic way and distrust him from the start before they even got to know him properly . Was this dense manner because he had spent so many years looking for someone who truly loved him and being repeatedly rejected ?

I really hate current comics, they are so ridiculous, this incessant search for the "ideals" of superheroes, they force the rest of the people to follow them, while they themselves never follow these so-called fake "ideals", they keep fraternizing Happily or dating murderous supervillains and criminals and then saying that, "deep down", they are good, the disgusting way in which Superheroes use the judicial system as a moral shield while considering themselves above the law they supposedly claim to defend ! It's all so ridiculous and absurd that I just can't suspend my disbelief anymore! Everything works for narrative purposes, it's all for fun, but I really can't do it anymore, I'm rooting against Dominic Toretto, John Wick, Harley Quinn, etc. They're all just bad guys, but anyone who goes against them is the "bad guy"!? And this also happens with the "heroes" of history, especially from DC and Marvel! Anyone who does not blindly follow HIS ideals and obey HIS every command without any hesitation is a dangerous person, a potential supervillain and has "too much power" to be left free!?!?!?!?!?!?! ?!?!? And the narrative of the comics really makes it seem like the "HEROES" are right??????? Are you going to address this in this fic? And will Zane really just forgive them without any punishment for trying to arrest him simply because they feel better with him in prison?

Okay... but what was he being accused of? Is this one of those comic book cases where the law is completely and "legally" disrespected by the Government itself?

He didn't even kill Amanda Waller that other idiot politician, I'm not asking why the other idiot superheroes distrust him just because of this ridiculous rule about don't kill this, don't kill that, if he kills him you'll be like him, what am I asking is why the President of the United States decided to declare Raiden a criminal ?

Until now I still don't understand why Raiden became a wanted criminal, besides breaking into the White House, all he did was expose the man to that other guy the s*** politician who invoked Rrigon. In the real world, breaking into the White House would make you a criminal, but the nonsense that Superheroes routinely do in the DC universe far outweighs that. I just don't understand how they declared him a fugitive, they just got angry and said "why not?" like in practically all American Comics or do they have some real accusation behind them?

Honestly, Clark and Lex's character development always seemed pretty ridiculous to me in Smallville! The series managed to make several character reformulations, giving the Green Acher a more serious and realistic personality, as well as several other heroes such as Black Canary, Cyborg , Martian Manhunter, but I was very forced to make Clark become the exaggeratedly all-loving hero cool as in the comics and Lex's development into a crazy, omnicidal supervillain seemed over the top and totally avoidable by anyone with common sense, while also "rescuing" genuinely evil people like Tess, the Kandorians, EVEN LIONEL , and various others over time! A particularly ridiculous fact about Smallville was that the reason Lex , when he was still a nice guy, became a person untrustworthy and untrust worthy in everyone's eyes was that he became ... A HEDONIST !?!?!?! Seriously , he started trying to overcome his personal tragedies by indulging in a partying and womanizing lifestyle and THAT made people treat him like dirt ! They had done a lot of bad things before , but did THAT make people lose trust in him ? Ridiculous !

This "thank" doesn't seem out of place, it's easy to forget that the main characters are still teenagers! Will this be addressed later on or will Clark be a womanizing scoundrel?