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Both girls were confused, on the one hand, they were in love with their childhood friend and were going to confess this week or the next one, they had already agreed to share it, but now they doubted, Haruto was more handsome than him and kinder, besides, for some reason, they began to like him.

Hentai System in a Hentai World

Hentai System in a Hentai World

Anime & Comics · Bloodnight

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G_N_K
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ohhhhhhhhhh.....

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Maybe in my previous world this wouldn't have been the right thing to do, but this is a hentai world, it's very likely that this will work.

Hentai System in a Hentai World

Hentai System in a Hentai World

Anime & Comics · Bloodnight

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well I hope so otherwise your story is pretty wholesome to read. My best regards for your future chapters ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Alvida went to the side of the ship. She first did 25 push-ups, followed by 25 squats. Alvida did not break a sweat. She then did 25 sit-ups followed by 5 laps around the ship. Alvida thought this was a good starting point. She still did not feel like she was getting closer to using haki, however her body felt stronger. Alvida then looked at the sea. "Slipstream Cannon," Alvida said as she spun her body rapidly. This generated a powerful current of air. Alvida compressed and fired it towards the ocean. The attack hit the ocean and exploded. The ocean convulsed with tumultuous energy. Waves, now charged with an ominous force, rose in towering peaks. It was violent. Alvida fired another attack. ""Slipstream Cannon," Alvida said again.The attack hit the ocean again. The waves rocked. "Slipstream Cannon," Alvida said once more. The attack rocked the waves. The waves hit the Miss Love Duck and rocked the boat slightly. 

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

Anime & Comics · Pop12

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1mth
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take care of saphir

G_N_K
1mth
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here* on* our free will

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1mth
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*He*She could not see his face

G_N_K
1mth
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face of this *plant* planet

G_N_K
1mth
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Ben , Vivi and Marianne

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1mth
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took *her* their

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1mth
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"She was doing a check-up,"Ben replied. A very intimate one, he thought.

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

Anime & Comics · Pop12

G_N_K
1mth
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author you know the duration for devil fruit being used also depends on users stamina and the exercise and training you are showing is not even good in our world so you can how lame character looks with these kind of training regimen. I earlier said the same thing but you said they are more focused on devil fruit but you also knows that in one piece anime people with low stamina can't use their devil fruit for too long. I highly recommend you to change their training regimen. Just compare yourself Ben and Luffy, you will see yourself that how much weak Ben seems in front of Luffy, Zoro and Sanji. I understand you don't want to make MC op from start but make it reasonable enough that he and his crew doesn't seem total joke in front of Luffy's crew. Next arc is gonna be skypiea and MC doesn't seem a little bit interested in learning haki. This makes us question MC's farsightedness and intelligence. I really enjoyed your story till now but if you don't improve the character of MC and strength then I will have to drop this and I really don't want to do that. You know in sea many powerhouse are simply dominating sea just on their haki prowess so think about this. It is true we love reading harem but not those story where MC is so much ignorant of real power of the world despite knowing the truth and story. It's just my suggestion you can ignore this I wrote which was in my heart and I don't want such a great story to turn lame and also don't rely on Luffy so much if we have to know how luffy is goona defeat every main villan then we will simply watch One Piece. We want original story revolving around one piece story line not someone else's pov.

Alvida went to the side of the ship. She first did 25 push-ups, followed by 25 squats. Alvida did not break a sweat. She then did 25 sit-ups followed by 5 laps around the ship. Alvida thought this was a good starting point. She still did not feel like she was getting closer to using haki, however her body felt stronger. Alvida then looked at the sea. "Slipstream Cannon," Alvida said as she spun her body rapidly. This generated a powerful current of air. Alvida compressed and fired it towards the ocean. The attack hit the ocean and exploded. The ocean convulsed with tumultuous energy. Waves, now charged with an ominous force, rose in towering peaks. It was violent. Alvida fired another attack. ""Slipstream Cannon," Alvida said again.The attack hit the ocean again. The waves rocked. "Slipstream Cannon," Alvida said once more. The attack rocked the waves. The waves hit the Miss Love Duck and rocked the boat slightly. 

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

Anime & Comics · Pop12

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1mth
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"Big bird?" Robin asked. She thought of an image of a rat with wings.

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

Anime & Comics · Pop12

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1mth
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you all are my treasure

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1mth
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there *is* was Zala and Robin's safety

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Ben just smiled and accepted his fate. They all walked out of the underground room and back up to the temple. They left the other pirates there, they looked like they were in good condition.

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

One Piece: Grand Harem Adventures

Anime & Comics · Pop12

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1mth
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*Robin*Ben said

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1mth
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so that we do not get lost

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1mth
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large ^****^ coming

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run^away^"

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